JC Brul Poet Tanka

A December Memento

at first fall of snow
on rustic bench we sat by 
watching snowflakes dance ~
under your old umbrella 
young dreams we shaped in snowballs




10 December 2022

A December Memento Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Your Choice 2023 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Juliet Ligon January 19, 2023 at 10:27 AM I love that last line; it has childhood hopes and playfulness to it.

Linda Alice Fowler January 6, 2023 at 6:34 AM Sweet, sweet, sweet! Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2022 at 9:43 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Blessings.................

Christuraj Alex December 25, 2022 at 2:26 AM "watching snowflakes dance" - is, indeed, is mystery-filled fun. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2022 at 7:02 PM I love the memory of youth in making snowballs. A sweet poem, my friend. thanks for entering my contest and congrats on the win.

Valsa George December 10, 2022 at 8:18 PM Young days are reserved for dreams ! In snow fall under an umbrella, it is exciting to be with company, dreaming away. Sweet memories.

Arlo Parker December 9, 2022 at 8:30 PM Remember....? Good luck wishes in the contest. =;o]