A Dead Man's Boat

A dead man’s boat
rowed itself from isle to isle,
dragging its dead man in its wake,
partially submerged, their tether tenuous,
yet somehow never broken.
Past The Isle Of Reeds,
where the slaves had been freed
from the crack of their master’s whip,
and their master, with great resentment,
would be exorcised of the malice
that he had so slavishly curated.
To The Isle Of Defeat
where it was fortunate to escape
the ruthless jagged rocks,
its dead man did not escape,
but in death was spared the agony
of the broken bones and lacerations.
Painfully close to The Isle Of Cleansing,
adorned by sands and rocks made new,
freshly crafted for their arrival
just moments before their arrival,
but the dead man’s boat
would not surrender its dead man.
To The Isle Of The Precipice
where gulls and albatross
sullied the ancient cliffs,
the boat stared up at them
but gave no thought to climbing them,
its dead man may have fallen from them,
perhaps in a better life.
The dead man’s boat
left the isles
and returned to open waters,
it’s dead man dragged in its wake,
together to sink in time.

27th March 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/26/2019 2:31:00 PM
Lawrence, I was captivated by the intrigue of your beautifully presented poem which I read as a compelling dark portrayal of one’s mind, body and soul being denied redemption. An absorbing, incredible and expressive piece, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/26/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, very kind. It's particularly pleasing to me if this one is well received.
Date: 4/12/2019 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! An enjoyable interesting read.
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Date: 4/13/2019 1:27:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, glad you liked this one.
Date: 4/10/2019 5:47:00 AM
Great imagery and storey telling. Rate this one highly Lawrence. Keep surprising us. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 4/10/2019 1:04:00 PM
Thanks, David, kind words very greatly appreciated.
Date: 3/30/2019 6:47:00 AM
Very deep...
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/30/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thanks for dropping in,SO, very pleased if you liked it.
Date: 3/27/2019 7:31:00 PM
I love the depth and the mystery within this fascinating dark tale my friend..A journey into the nether regions and a dark passage in time.. A fav.. a true dark gem..
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Date: 3/27/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, my friend, it's always good to have such good feedback from you; thanks no end for fave.
Date: 3/27/2019 4:19:00 PM
the parade of a demise till its final bend gives this soulful poem a glorious way to celebrate one's passage... so deep, incisive, lawrence... huggs
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Date: 3/27/2019 11:18:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, very kind; I'm always pleased at any write being well received by a poetess as gifted and discerning as yourself.
Date: 3/27/2019 1:54:00 PM
Many in the world behave in such a way, much like these moments you have expressed here. This last thought in general. "together to sink in time" Deep and powerful!! Once again, are your words. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Branderz, always good to see you here, and very pleasing if it has some meaning to you.
Date: 3/27/2019 11:30:00 AM
This journey in dead man's boat..evoked the days from back when slavery was prevalent. A certain pride the boat showed carrying the dead man.. and never surrendered..choosing to sink instead. A deep message in your poem, Lawrence.
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Date: 3/27/2019 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Vijay, always appreciated, and always very gratifying to know that some thought is prodded.
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