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A Day's Stay

Fog
Mystic
Dawn mirage

Saffron sky
Noon tide
Glow

Dusk
Dark flame
My True North-

9/27/18

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 9:13:00 PM

Great string of Haiku, Michelle, congratulations on your win. <3

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/13/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thanks for your comment, Eve!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 4:17:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery Michelle, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/13/2018 4:46:00 PM

Appreciate your kind words, Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:49:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/13/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 11:48:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Michelle. Well done.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/13/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Line!

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 10:27:00 AM

Great imagery Michele, awesome job on this new form. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest. Charlie :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/13/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thank you for placing me in your contest, Charlie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2018 6:05:00 PM

another beauty. I love your way with imagery.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/4/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thank you, appreciate it!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/28/2018 4:30:00 PM

Your mood ring must be glowing! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 7:47:00 PM

Thanks, Rico!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 9/28/2018 6:32:00 AM

Gorgeous.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 7:48:00 PM

Appreciate that, thanks!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/27/2018 11:16:00 PM

Lovely imagery Michelle. Tom

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 7:53:00 PM

Much appreciated, Tom-

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/27/2018 9:13:00 PM

Lovely! And I love the ending, too: "My True North-"... I think everyone has a certain time of day that best "suits" them, and I love how you expressed that. ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 7:54:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, Rhona!