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A Day To Remember

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A Day To Remember

I thirst for just a little sunshine
A wisp of warm air to stir me
I get another gray dreary day
Wind so cold it chills to the bone

I lift my hands up to the sky
Try to break through to the sun
I blow my breath into the wind
To warm it through and through

The end result I can now see
There isn't a thing I can do
This is the day God has sent
So I will enjoy the day I have


Entry for Brian's  Any Poem12 Line Max Contest
3rd Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 4/6/2014 4:27:00 PM
Perfect. Absolutely fantastic. The Lord will be proud..
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Date: 3/21/2012 4:11:00 PM
Hi Carol - Beautiful thoughts...beautifully worded. Enjoyed reading this. - Gail
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:15:00 PM
BIG belated congrats for this win. It was well deserved.
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:24:00 AM
Yes, every day is a gift from God. A lovely write, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/23/2012 8:46:00 AM
oh yea.. we gotto enjoy them... conrats on the win.....sashi
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Date: 2/22/2012 2:37:00 PM
fav line [I get another gray dreary day/ Wind so cold it chills to the bone] the smattering of alliteration is lovely! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:02:00 PM
Very nice words - Congrats..........George
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
Yes,you should enjoy it!Congratulations on your win,Carol.
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:23:00 AM
cheery smiles for your shimmering win, carol.. comgrats with huggs! :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:24:00 PM
Congrats. Carol on your win, lovely poem, hugs,vie
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Date: 2/21/2012 4:06:00 PM
Awesome write,Carol.It`s really a day to remember...Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this Contest...
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:20:00 PM
Carol, wonderful poem, wonderful message. I really enjoyed this fine work. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol, with this lovely poem, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations Carol on your win with this beautiful poem.Thanks for your congratulatory messages at my pages.
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congrats, Carol. Beautiful, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:18:00 AM
congrats Carol on a marvelous win for these lovely words .. so beautiful my friend.. thankxx for all your sweet comments so encouraging to me luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Brian for the honor of placing in your contest. Thank you to everyone who has commented on this piece. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:05:00 PM
You are hoping for spring. I'm in Florida hoping for a little chill. Yours is a great message, we should just be happy for the God given day no matter what the weather.Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:08:00 PM
I really like this one and I think Brian should too. REALLY great poem, Carol.
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Date: 2/20/2012 2:50:00 PM
Patience must keep up. What day God sends for us, without denying that we should well come and enjoy that day. Loved your devotion, thanks and wish you all the best in the contest, bl always
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:45:00 PM
Very nice Carol. A gem for the contest. Luv Michael
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:35:00 PM
this portrays a wonderful attitude..love it! Good luck in the contest Carol...love,Deb
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