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A Day To Remember

I thirst for just a little sunshine A wisp of warm air to stir me I get another gray dreary day Wind so cold it chills to the bone I lift my hands up to the sky Try to break through to the sun I blow my breath into the wind To warm it through and through The end result I can now see There isn't a thing I can do This is the day God has sent So I will enjoy the day I have Entry for Brian's Any Poem12 Line Max Contest 3rd Place Winner

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Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 4/6/2014 4:27:00 PM

Perfect. Absolutely fantastic. The Lord will be proud..

Gail Debole

Date: 3/21/2012 4:11:00 PM

Hi Carol - Beautiful thoughts...beautifully worded. Enjoyed reading this. - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 4:15:00 PM

BIG belated congrats for this win. It was well deserved.

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/24/2012 10:24:00 AM

Yes, every day is a gift from God. A lovely write, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 2/23/2012 8:46:00 AM

oh yea.. we gotto enjoy them... conrats on the win.....sashi

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/22/2012 2:37:00 PM

fav line [I get another gray dreary day/ Wind so cold it chills to the bone] the smattering of alliteration is lovely! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

George Aul

Date: 2/22/2012 1:02:00 PM

Very nice words - Congrats..........George

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/22/2012 8:02:00 AM

Yes,you should enjoy it!Congratulations on your win,Carol.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2012 7:23:00 AM

cheery smiles for your shimmering win, carol.. comgrats with huggs! :)

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/21/2012 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/21/2012 4:06:00 PM

Awesome write,Carol.It`s really a day to remember...Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this Contest...

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/21/2012 2:20:00 PM

Carol, wonderful poem, wonderful message. I really enjoyed this fine work. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/21/2012 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carol, with this lovely poem, love Elizabeth

Kash Poet

Date: 2/21/2012 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations Carol on your win with this beautiful poem.Thanks for your congratulatory messages at my pages.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/21/2012 12:08:00 PM

Congrats, Carol. Beautiful, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/21/2012 10:18:00 AM

congrats Carol on a marvelous win for these lovely words .. so beautiful my friend.. thankxx for all your sweet comments so encouraging to me luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Brian for the honor of placing in your contest. Thank you to everyone who has commented on this piece. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/20/2012 11:05:00 PM

You are hoping for spring. I'm in Florida hoping for a little chill. Yours is a great message, we should just be happy for the God given day no matter what the weather.Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 5:08:00 PM

I really like this one and I think Brian should too. REALLY great poem, Carol.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/20/2012 2:50:00 PM

Patience must keep up. What day God sends for us, without denying that we should well come and enjoy that day. Loved your devotion, thanks and wish you all the best in the contest, bl always

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/20/2012 1:45:00 PM

Very nice Carol. A gem for the contest. Luv Michael

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/20/2012 1:35:00 PM

this portrays a wonderful attitude..love it! Good luck in the contest Carol...love,Deb