Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Quatrain

A Day Out

A Day out




Setting Sun of countryside,
Ducks skitter in lake,
Picnic basket, kids relish
pie and choco cake.

Taking turns for the frisbee,
till face flushes cool,
Exciting trills of Robin,
water splash of pool.




Written April 13th, 2015
For Andrea's " Have you tried a 7/5 trochee " contest

Awarded 11th place

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Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:47 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus May 2, 2015 at 12:35 PM Hi Upma! Enjoyed your fun day out! Stopping by to say hello and with congratulations! // paul

Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 6:59 AM sounds like a fun time! Congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2015 at 1:03 AM Though there were several places off the meter, I LOVED the content of your poem. It creates such a cute scene. congrats in my contest.

Skat A May 2, 2015 at 12:51 AM GOOD WIN...SKAT

Funom Makama April 20, 2015 at 8:44 AM Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.

Constance La France April 15, 2015 at 9:37 AM Upma, you have penned a beautiful day in words, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Dance Into May

Barbara Gorelick April 13, 2015 at 6:59 PM A perfect day! Enjoyed. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2015 at 6:17 AM - A lovely poem, Dr.Upma - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)