A Day In Spring

I shall compare you to a day in spring
to complement the summer Shakespeare wrote.
Your voice is fairer than the birds that sing
of love, in every way on every note.

The sweetened fabric 'round a flower's face
is far less lovely than your silken hair:
the former lacks in sheen and goes to waste
when comes the callous winter's annual air.

The season's song, its scent, its look and feel
are still quite beautiful, make no mistake,
but this is true because your own appeal
is made the greater by these very traits.

The spring may flaunt a lovely sky and floor,
but springtime makes you gorgeous all the more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Amadore Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Very nice, musical and rhythmic; lovely wording.
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