A Day In May

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Pink tree plunge down on plant mirky, White star blooms and grins flood the sky, Jasmine scents float at spring party, Cheers rush before we dance all day. Guitar echoes with creek willow, I dream of plants in my garden, earth-hued soil, yet veiled by dim glow, rose pink moon, meet the gold hearten 5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: May 03, 2022 Checked by: HMS.COM A Lay for A Day In May Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2022 2:03:00 PM

Lasaad, back with congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2022 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Nature in all of the beauty. Today, be blessed with your win....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2022 2:09:00 PM

Great imagery. check spellings and other little things and with this kind of imagery, you'll do even better with me! Congrats in my contest.

Valsa George

Date: 5/4/2022 9:00:00 PM

An array of lovely images queuing up one after the other ! Heavenly .....

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/4/2022 6:22:00 AM

Wonderful poetry that exalts the month of May, dearest Lasaad! Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/4/2022 2:49:00 AM

The earth has moved and we are no longer enjoying the May we knew. However this is a delightful poem, great imagery.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/3/2022 4:25:00 PM

A perfect mood for a day in May. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/3/2022 4:05:00 PM

Delightful! Your imagery sets the May stage. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Bill Baker

Date: 5/3/2022 2:18:00 PM

Sounds like a great day to me, Sotto. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill