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A Day In May

Pink tree plunge down on plant mirky,
White star blooms and grins flood the sky,
Jasmine scents float at spring party,
Cheers rush before we dance all day.

Guitar echoes with creek willow,
I dream of plants in my garden,
earth-hued soil, yet veiled by dim glow,
rose pink moon, meet the gold hearten

5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER


Written: May 03, 2022

Checked by: HMS.COM

A Lay for A Day In May Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Eve Roper May 19, 2022 at 2:03 PM Lasaad, back with congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2022 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Nature in all of the beauty. Today, be blessed with your win....................

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2022 at 2:09 PM Great imagery. check spellings and other little things and with this kind of imagery, you'll do even better with me! Congrats in my contest.

Valsa George May 4, 2022 at 9:00 PM An array of lovely images queuing up one after the other ! Heavenly .....

Demetrios Trifiatis May 4, 2022 at 6:22 AM Wonderful poetry that exalts the month of May, dearest Lasaad! Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar May 4, 2022 at 2:49 AM The earth has moved and we are no longer enjoying the May we knew. However this is a delightful poem, great imagery.

Eve Roper May 3, 2022 at 4:25 PM A perfect mood for a day in May. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you

Paulette Calasibetta May 3, 2022 at 4:05 PM Delightful! Your imagery sets the May stage. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Bill Baker May 3, 2022 at 2:18 PM Sounds like a great day to me, Sotto. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill