A Day At the Cape Cod

Brunette shadows echo off of the afternoon;
moving loftily through the atmosphere with cotton kisses 
Under a pastel, sea blue dome 
Star gazing pines stand tall and high 
Reaching up and out, for a brush of the sun 
Along the craggy path of thickened scrubs;
Coarse sea plants engage, along the road 
White sands pose in piles,
that look as though they were drawn, by an artist 
Toasted air passes by my window,
as we approach the seaside 
The Atlantic Ocean haunts my senses 
Mounds of sand dunes reach up in spectacle, 
as their tall rough grasses shift in the breeze
Swarms of bodies bathe by the waters 
Children swam in piles of sand ,
with buckets and shovels and laughter alike
The soothing sounds of the waves -
crashing along, in constant frantic motion 
We rest on our blanket of ease
The sounds of the ocean caress and utter, in the breeze
We are in a motionless trace of sight and sensations
Locked in my memory, I have bottled a moment in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/13/2008 12:49:00 PM
Have never been there, always wanted to visit. sounds so peaceful and content. this was a great write.
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Date: 8/13/2008 7:39:00 AM
My goodness Laura, felt like I was immersed into a painting! Your writing is simply exquisite. Yes, I have also been there and you have captured it beyond beautiful. Sigh. Wish I lived there. Thanks for bringing me back. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/13/2008 5:58:00 AM
Laura - You have not only bottled that moment in time you have done it in an amazingly beautiful way - God Bless
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Date: 8/13/2008 3:41:00 AM
Beautiful, Laura! My Grandmother in law lives on the Cape so we are there often, and yes, it is gorgeous and magical. You have painted the perfect picture of it here, well done, love Kristin
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Date: 8/12/2008 7:26:00 PM
Oh...I wish I were there on Cape Cod to catch the Atlantic breezes!! You painted a perfect picture. We live on the pacific side of this land, but I remember my one visit to Cape Cod...a treasured memory! Love this poem! ....Your friend...Carrie
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