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A Day At the Beach

A clear sky dawned, A hot summer breeze stirred; And the tall sand grass swayed like majestic swans. The heat of the day drove all from the beach, Except a few hearty souls who strutted about, And then sought cover under the umbrella's shade. The water sparkled and then foamed From the bright sun and the never-ending waves. Eyes grew heavy from the heat and sun, And soon closed to take a rest surrounded by The rhythm of crashing waves. A summer rest was here - and a lazy time was had - While overhead sea gulls dove gracefully into the sea In search of unsuspecting prey. And upon the sand I lay, watched the clouds float by, And dreamed of faraway places, And let life drift slowly by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/15/2012 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Richard. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2012 11:20:00 PM
I think that if you said under an umbrella it would sound better and flow better. You told the story well and for most part this has a nice flow and it's own rythem. All around I would say and enjoyable read.
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Date: 9/21/2011 9:18:00 PM
Perfection for my mind from yours. The scene is perfect and I am willing to go.
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:12:00 AM
makes me all lazy now just want to lie here and do nothing Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 2:13:00 PM
You sure got me wishing I was at the beach, having this laid back day just lying on the sand and enjoying the sea breeze! Really enjoyed this write, Richard, thanks for taking your reader there :D
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