A Day At the Beach

A clear sky dawned,
A hot summer breeze stirred;
And the tall sand grass swayed like majestic swans.
The heat of the day drove all from the beach,
Except a few hearty souls who strutted about,
And then sought cover under the umbrella's shade.
The water sparkled and then foamed
From the bright sun and the never-ending waves.
Eyes grew heavy from the heat and sun,
And soon closed to take a rest surrounded by
The rhythm of crashing waves.
A summer rest was here - and a lazy time was had -
While overhead sea gulls dove gracefully into the sea
In search of unsuspecting prey.
And upon the sand I lay,
watched the clouds float by,
And dreamed of faraway places,
And let life drift slowly by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Richard. Love, Carol
Allen Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 11:20 PM
I think that if you said under an umbrella it would sound better and flow better. You told the story well and for most part this has a nice flow and it's own rythem. All around I would say and enjoyable read.
Wesley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Perfection for my mind from yours. The scene is perfect and I am willing to go.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:12 AM
makes me all lazy now just want to lie here and do nothing Luv*Skat
K. Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 2:13 PM
You sure got me wishing I was at the beach, having this laid back day just lying on the sand and enjoying the sea breeze! Really enjoyed this write, Richard, thanks for taking your reader there :D
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