A Date For Two

A candle light formal dinner
Some prefers like that
but as for me
I want it up in a rooftop
Or simply in the garden
A picnic in the rooftop,
Where we can see the skies
Under the moonlit and stars
I wish the house near a beach
So we could see seagulls free
If in the garden..
A flower tuck side in my ear
I wish there are lots of flowerbuds
Half and fully blossomed
So their natural fragrance gloom
Butterflies that will fly 
Hope there's a tree we can lean
Or to each other's arms we can lean
Being next to each other
Holding and squeezing each other's hands
Sometimes even a half hug 
Or him or me lying on one's lap
Putting a grape or chip to one's lip
Caressing one's face
Familiarizing with each curve
Lots or small talking or no talk
Appreciating the essence of togetherness

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olive_eloi
6:27 pm
02/13/2014

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/10/2014 4:31:00 PM
I'd prefer a Grape to a Chip if I had the choice, but beggars can't be choosers. There's certainly attributes in this piece that I would love to be a part of, James :)
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Date: 2/16/2014 10:55:00 PM
Lovely write!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/17/2014 3:53:00 AM
thANKS much for passing by and reading my compositions :)
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