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A Dank Day

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Monchielle Stanza
Comprised of four stanzas (verses) of 6 syllable lines, with the rhyme pattern of
xxAxA xxBxB xxCxC xxDxD , and the first line in stanza one, is repeated
in each stanza as line one.

Today is a dank day that hosts a sullen sun, cloudy and overcast shadows start shaking as breezes blow hard and fast. Today is a dank day, yet dribbling drops of rain water a thirsty earth, nurturing Nature and hastening Spring's rebirth. Today is a dank day that turns white into green dabbing it on the trees, soon, snowdrops start sprouting as soil starts to unfreeze. Today is a dank day, April's prelude to May, and yet, a sign of Spring who'll soon be on Her way to teach songbirds to sing.

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Constance La France

Date: 12/16/2023 1:14:00 PM

Emile, love your poem and the form Monchielle Stanza, a great example for your contest and will try my best to write one worthy, blessings

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2023 2:38:00 PM

Thanks, Constance; I appreciate your comments and look forward to reading your poem in my contest, my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/4/2022 11:03:00 AM

Emile, your power of creative expression is on full display in this poem my friend - sullen sun and shrinking shadows! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2022 3:18:00 AM

Congrats on this great winning work in Andrea's Monchielle Contest. WTG. I enjoyed reading it. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2022 6:19:00 PM

Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/2/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2022 2:52:00 PM

This is SO creative, Emile. I am feeling kind of bad now reading the poems on my list again and thinking, hmm, maybe I should have just done four placements instead of five because I'm noticing many of my fourth placed ones were pretty much as great as the other third place winners!!! Congrats and thanks so much for my win in your wonderful recently judged contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2022 3:55:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate your comments and welcome the placement. Contests are always hard to judge, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/23/2022 7:30:00 PM

Stunningly well-done, my friend. I'm so happy to see your post, considering recent events. I see this at the top of the list, indeed! I hesitate to tell you this, but it was approaching 90 degrees here in Kentucky today with a beautiful clear blue sky.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2022 7:17:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, I envy you with such warm temps, here it is pretty much as I described, stay safe, I'm still getting over covid, but things are improving slowly, my friend, Emile.

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/23/2022 5:11:00 PM

lots of danky days here at the moment , most miserable April I can recall weather wise, best of luck in the contest Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2022 7:18:00 AM

Thanks, Francine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.