Deb M Poet Rhyme

-A Dance Throughout The Ages

It is finally time to talk about the wee dance
A dance exhibited throughout the ages
By humans from all walks of life
At any time and in many places

Now, children love the wee dance
Legs crossed  tightly, body jiggling about
Left going to the toilet last minute
The child yelling “ the wee is coming out”

Hearty laughter can bring on the wee dance
Legs crossed tightly, body jiggling about
“Stop….Im going to wet myself” heard during times of uncontrollable laughter
Some doing the deed….no doubt!

The wee dance does not discriminate
It can happen to you or me
The only requirement needed
Is a bladder full of wee ….

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Linda Alice Fowler October 29, 2025 at 6:28 AM Oh my goodness her Deb. A delightful read this morning to kickstart the day! LOL. I really got a chuckle from this one my friend! :) Deb M November 11, 2025 at 7:22 PM Glad you enjoyed L.O …l think we all have experienced the Wee dance at some stage hehe! Belated thanks my friend…Debx

CayCay Godwin October 2, 2025 at 10:11 PM The wee dance can come about when one is laughing so hard they feel they might, 'ink', my fav is in the car where a man could use a jar, but a woman? Everyone will relate to this fun write, Deb, everyone who has a bladder. Really enjoyed. Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:09 AM Thanks CayCay….glad you enjoyed! Debx

Paula Goldsmith October 2, 2025 at 2:54 PM I enjoyed reading your creative write. What a fun and true story. Have a fun day writing away......... Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:10 AM Thankyou Paula and yes very true! Ha….Debx

Sara Kendrick October 2, 2025 at 7:26 AM I enjoyed reading this one and I am sure most of us have experienced this. Thanks for giving us a chuckle today. I needed one. Sara K Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:11 AM You are welcome Sara and thankyou! Debx

Kevin Leake October 2, 2025 at 4:45 AM Had me laughing Deb I'm sure the wee dance will catch on Kevin Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:11 AM Good to hear Kevin Ha! Debx

Len Gasun October 2, 2025 at 1:56 AM A marvelous and delightful poem my dear poet friend Deb. I love dancing and I want to dance again after reading your poem. I love it and enjoyed a lot. Thanks for sharing and giving me big smiles. God bless! Hugs Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:14 AM Thankyou Len! Debx

sara Etgen-Baker October 1, 2025 at 5:12 PM a delightful poem--made me smile....many of us 'older' types also do the 'wee dance.' It's a very popular dance at our senior center :-) sending you hugs and blessings, Sara Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:13 AM Haha all the seniors doing the wee dance! Thanks Sara….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2025 at 11:38 AM - A wonderful poem full of joy, Deb :) - hugs Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:13 AM Awww thanks Sunshine! Debx

John Lawless October 1, 2025 at 5:03 AM QUI, QUI, mon ami ....and when the wee dance is done the laughter increases.... Deb M October 14, 2025 at 5:12 AM Cheers John! Debx