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A Dalliance

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dandy butterfly lands on a bunch of flowers~ a lip locked ballet August.15.2022 ~ Placed First~ Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor – Tania Kitchin

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/25/2022 6:02:00 PM

Wonderful! An inspired Haiku that startles with the third line - so original + imaginative. Congratulations! Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:23:00 PM

oh wow, Spicy one on nature. Love it. Congrats for your win

Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 2:44:00 PM

Nice win, Valsa. A delightful Haiku. Bill

Len Gasun

Date: 8/23/2022 6:41:00 AM

Splendid image my dear friend. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Wonderful" write/picture. Love it. I love flowers/butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:42:00 AM

Wow! "a lip locked ballet" - So passionate! Congratulations!

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/22/2022 5:18:00 AM

Marvellous! You captured it well. Very cinematic! Congratulations on your first place win my friend. Blessings!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:06:00 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your first place win with your superb haiku, love the last line!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/17/2022 9:06:00 PM

Love your theme Valsa...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/16/2022 2:10:00 AM

Dear Valsa, the imagery here is great.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2022 7:12:00 PM

Especially love the title and the last line. No dilly-dallying around when the lips are locked. ~ Flower Power

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/15/2022 5:25:00 PM

Dearest Valsa, your golden pen captures a vibrant twinkling in time with enchanting imagery. Nature’s beauty reflects in your haiku, especially in the fantastic expression of your great last line! Love it. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan