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A Dalliance

dandy butterfly
lands on a bunch of flowers~
a lip locked ballet


August.15.2022

~ Placed First~

Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor – Tania Kitchin

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Brian Sambourne

August 25, 2022 at 6:02 PM

Wonderful! An inspired Haiku that startles with the third line - so original + imaginative. Congratulations! Brian

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2022 at 1:23 PM

oh wow, Spicy one on nature. Love it. Congrats for your win

Bill Baker

August 23, 2022 at 2:44 PM

Nice win, Valsa. A delightful Haiku. Bill

Len Gasun

August 23, 2022 at 6:41 AM

Splendid image my dear friend. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

August 22, 2022 at 1:09 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Wonderful" write/picture. Love it. I love flowers/butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Christuraj Alex

August 22, 2022 at 7:42 AM

Wow! "a lip locked ballet" - So passionate! Congratulations!

JC Brul

August 22, 2022 at 5:18 AM

Marvellous! You captured it well. Very cinematic! Congratulations on your first place win my friend. Blessings!

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2022 at 5:06 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your first place win with your superb haiku, love the last line!

Michael Tor

August 17, 2022 at 9:06 PM

Love your theme Valsa...

Victor Buhagiar

August 16, 2022 at 2:10 AM

Dear Valsa, the imagery here is great.

Gershon Wolf

August 15, 2022 at 7:12 PM

Especially love the title and the last line. No dilly-dallying around when the lips are locked. ~ Flower Power

Susan Ashley

August 15, 2022 at 5:25 PM

Dearest Valsa, your golden pen captures a vibrant twinkling in time with enchanting imagery. Nature’s beauty reflects in your haiku, especially in the fantastic expression of your great last line! Love it. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan