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I be a common salty once
          no captain's bars, did bear
               yet blessed was I to venture
     where few a skipper dared

from crow's nest high aloft I saw
          those bright coast beacons wink
               thru biting spray's December gale
     what shoals and reefs would sink

for countless days I rocked atop
          that oaken spar’s good length
               as wake and skies conveyed my eyes
     Lord Neptune's sullen strength

busy dogs, the mates and jacks
          bent hard while tasked below
               as toward the sky, a glass to eye
     my post waved to-and-fro

first was I to e'er spot land
          my voice, the first to yell
               first to sight the skull and bone
     and raise loud warning bell

"thar she blows!" was oft' my cry
          if spied foamed breach, had I
               and "friend or foe?!?" the question barked
     when strange sails split the sky

but moments to becalm my soul
          as swells tick-tocked the time
               were star-filled nights, a bullion moon
     and the phosphorescent brine

the darkest times were battlements
          when the ship groaned in its might
               but never dark, those eventides -
     sea and vault - awash with light!

quite rare it was to find this tar
          midst the deck or down below
               and rarer still would I abdicate
     my realm there, high the crow

well, I'm adrift on shore now
          with old brittle bones and gray
               yet in my lubber's mind I still
     climb masts to watch and sway

I bounce wee kin on knobby knees
          and spin those swabbie tales -
               of Elmo's Fire and scorching skies
     wild battles, storms, and whales

and when the angels task me
          to one new and heav'nly crow
               I'll bend gaze to a looking glass
     and give a hearty "tally-ho!"








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Date: 11/9/2024 2:49:00 PM
You’ve creatively captured the salty sailor’s views so well in this fine poetic write, Greg! We have a sailboat and you’ve describe the mood of a seafarer perfectly. Tally ho!! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2024 8:39:00 PM
Well you’re an excellent poet, and I’ve always admired your talent! Take care! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/9/2024 3:07:00 PM
Oh, thank you so very kindly, Laura, I rarely get comments here anymore, so they really mean a lot. I hope you are well, my friend! <3

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