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A CROWN OF HORNETS

For what is pride but an ego's false facade Greed a fallow field of need Lust a liars claim of love Wrath a harbinger of hate Gluttony a beggars fitful dream Envy a failures silken cloak Sloth an active acquiescence

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2023 7:35:00 PM

A crown of hornets you've explained for sure.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/26/2023 6:29:00 PM

Classic write, John. In the tradition of great orators such as Cassius, Brutus, Marc Antony, and even old Late-Night-Show Host Steve Allen... Love it, really. Fine penning. ~ Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/26/2023 2:26:00 PM

this is such a powerful poem, Arlo. The crown of hornets is a great descriptive title and quite appropriate for your presentation of ego's false facade! I also noticed your alliteration. I just liked this poem for its honesty. Am faving...enjoy your day, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 11/26/2023 6:50:00 AM

Personality traits of the lame, wicked and wealthy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.