A crimson sky breaks the distant shore

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Choose a line poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 05/20/25

“A crimson sky breaks the distant shore” This kaleidoscope of colours I just adore I love to stroll by the ever changing sea At peace with the world, I feel so carefree The sky’s ablaze with scarlet and gold It’s such a glorious sight to behold I’ll stay until the sun sinks down low A cool breeze blows so it’s time to go My beach walks are always fabulous fun I’ll see dawn breaking or the setting sun Where the sky changes colour as time shifts Mother Nature provides such fabulous gifts

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2025 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful! Your sky imagery is gorgeous!

Terry Flood

Date: 5/20/2025 3:36:00 PM

A smashing depiction of mother nature’s evening artistry, Jan. I’ve seen a few ocean sunsets, but very many lakeside ones… with the skies replicated on the waters it almost like a two for one deal. Best of luck in the contest. Terry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/20/2025 1:59:00 PM

A wonderful description of a sunset, Jan - something I love to have the privilege to watch from time to time. You’re lucky to be able to see it more often…

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/20/2025 1:45:00 PM

There is nothing more beautiful at the end of the day than a golden sunset and a walk on the beach. Really beautiful, Jan. You have captured the glory! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2025 12:04:00 PM

- Nature is full of beauty Jan, in fact even fuller than we may know... something more hidden than other things.. one just has to be impressed and enjoy ... as your poem :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 5/20/2025 11:23:00 AM

There's so much beauty in our horizons, if only people would take a moment to watch them. Much better than smelling roses. Love your lines, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/20/2025 10:03:00 AM

I love this lovely Rhyme write with 2 great pictures. Yes, Mother Nature is full of beauty and gifts for us to enjoy. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..........