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A crimson sky breaks the distant shore


“A crimson sky breaks the distant shore” This kaleidoscope of colours I just adore I love to stroll by the ever changing sea At peace with the world, I feel so carefree The sky’s ablaze with scarlet and gold It’s such a glorious sight to behold I’ll stay until the sun sinks down low A cool breeze blows so it’s time to go My beach walks are always fabulous fun I’ll see dawn breaking or the setting sun Where the sky changes colour as time shifts Mother Nature provides such fabulous gifts
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Date: 5/29/2025 9:10:00 AM
Your poem shows the allure of the ocean. Some seashores seem more magical than others. I enjoy your fond words for nature, our fragile world.
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:47:00 AM
Jan, fabulous gifts indeed. It's quite wonderful that we get to enjoy things like this. Gifts indeed and we are lucky to be able to accept them. Smiles!
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Date: 5/29/2025 5:30:00 AM
My favorite time of day, i live 6 stories high facing west, I get an extraordinary view of the remarkable every evening. Jan your description has nailed it. God Bless
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Date: 5/25/2025 2:21:00 PM
I love it when you write imagery with rhyme, it always flows so loverly and delights me. Never mind, I see I already commented and loved.
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:30:00 PM
sweet dear poet ')
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:58:00 AM
I'm so occupied being awed by your limericks that I forgot you also hold a pen that writes beautiful rhyme - it's perfect, Jan. LOVE CayCay
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:24:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your write again. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 5/22/2025 3:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan, Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/22/2025 8:31:00 AM
Hi Jan, Your last line say it all for me! Isn't it such a gift!! Your imagery creates beautiful thought to dance through my mind! Lovely to see this side of you! Happy Thursday
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Date: 5/20/2025 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful! Your sky imagery is gorgeous!
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Date: 5/20/2025 3:36:00 PM
A smashing depiction of mother nature’s evening artistry, Jan. I’ve seen a few ocean sunsets, but very many lakeside ones… with the skies replicated on the waters it almost like a two for one deal. Best of luck in the contest. Terry
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Date: 5/20/2025 1:59:00 PM
A wonderful description of a sunset, Jan - something I love to have the privilege to watch from time to time. You’re lucky to be able to see it more often…
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Date: 5/20/2025 1:45:00 PM
There is nothing more beautiful at the end of the day than a golden sunset and a walk on the beach. Really beautiful, Jan. You have captured the glory! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings!
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Date: 5/20/2025 12:04:00 PM
- Nature is full of beauty Jan, in fact even fuller than we may know... something more hidden than other things.. one just has to be impressed and enjoy ... as your poem :) - hugs
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Date: 5/20/2025 11:23:00 AM
There's so much beauty in our horizons, if only people would take a moment to watch them. Much better than smelling roses. Love your lines, Jan.
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Date: 5/20/2025 10:03:00 AM
I love this lovely Rhyme write with 2 great pictures. Yes, Mother Nature is full of beauty and gifts for us to enjoy. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..........
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