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~a Crimson Rose I~

Driving along a coastal road The top drawn down On a magical seaside day She, thumbing through a magazine Reaching for the stereo dial "Stop," I say, she smiles The wind, dancing about her hair Waltzing, she seems so, astonishingly beautiful today ~ Her reddened lips, her darkened eyelashes Her blushed cheeks, and, her perfect nose I try to sing along, with Peter Gabriels song "In your eyes, the light the heat...." I smile, as I gently caress her brow She, lovingly leans into my hand, and my heart is warm I look back ahead, and then toward the west Thinking about....thinking about....thinking.... Her precious voice ~ "Can we dear," she says, "can we" I smile again, as she softly kisses my ear My eyes glance toward the mirror A tiny heart, that still lives there today Next to a cross, that she once did wear Lost in thought again.... So magnificent, this moment it seems As I glide my fingers, through her soft and waving hair Slowly, across her shoulder, and down, her silkened arm Until, our hands become intwined, as one ~ One, within her endless 'Splendor!' "In your eyes, the light the heat...." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I lift my head, from upon my pillow I look at the clock, I look at the day My eyes drop, lost in dreams again.... I glance beyond the door, and across the walls Until, her picture sitting there ~ Never very far, never far from my eyes I sit up, I touch it, I hold it.... She, wearing her favorite whitened sundress Her smile, as a beckoning light~ Her golden skin, smooth and glistening, radiant ~ Walking upon the waters edge Gliding, atop the sands, at sunset The oceans tides, gently about our feet "Can we dear," she laughs, "can we" As I lift her up, as I lift her high, twirling, into the air.... "Forever my love" ~ "The light, the heat, I am complete...." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I step outside, onto the balcony A cup of coffee, within my hands A tad bit nippy, I think, today As I look, upon the waves.... (Continued).

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Date: 6/24/2009 10:35:00 PM
Dearest John, sounds like a beautiful memory, and you capture that here with every word to this special someone. Your pen flows so effortlessly down the page, and this is utterly breathtaking. I shall quickly go and read the continuation of this love story here. Thank you for the time to comment on my work they are always so kind and giving much appreciated. Love, Charlene
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:15:00 AM
your lady is a gem and these words are pearls to this beautiful jewel---how lucky one couple would be to share so much love--awesome--beautiful-to my favs,i read part two--cont...
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Date: 4/9/2009 9:27:00 AM
Dear John: How beautiful your words flow together into a lovely poem. Really nice. Thanks for reading my poems. I'm so very glad that enjoyed them. Also for being so kind in your commenting to my work. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 3/13/2009 9:47:00 AM
Tis is such a tender, loving write. On to part 2! ove, Robin
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Date: 2/5/2009 12:47:00 PM
Hi John, I hope you are good. I tried to send you a comment last week and it was blocked. I hope you are well. I will commnet properly later. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/5/2009 11:00:00 AM
hiya how are you love diane,
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:23:00 AM
This is so well written John. The beauty of the first part of the poem..the drive..her hair..captured so well adn the transitions work wonders in this piece.
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