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A Creep

She broke my heart, what can I do? I can’t believe she fancies you. You schemed to tear our love apart. What can I do: she broke my heart? She’ll see some day you’re such a creep, And maybe then she’ll sit and weep; But till that time, you’ll have your way. You’re such a creep! She’ll see some day… For Andrea’s Swap Quatrains contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2014 12:34:00 PM
I knew he was a creep! congrats on your win..Her loss...BG
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:33:00 AM
Heartfelt and I had a feeling this was yours, Jack!! Knowing your situation really made me like this one a lot!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:15:00 AM
Love can sometimes be truly blind. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 3/9/2014 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, jack
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:59:00 AM
good one, jack!.. ..sweet 'grads on your award!.. huggs
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:30:00 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Jack.
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:51:00 PM
Excellent quatrains Jack! Hugs
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Date: 3/3/2014 11:52:00 PM
Nice job, Jack. Been there with this them in real life. Was always better off as I recall, however. Keep up the good work.
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Date: 3/2/2014 6:32:00 PM
Good poem Jack.
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Date: 3/1/2014 12:24:00 PM
Cool form, Jack! Good luck!
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:26:00 AM
So true Jack. Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/28/2014 6:36:00 AM
Very good...but would you have her back!
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:25:00 PM
You are a masterful and ingenious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have delighted every humorous part of my me (though I know this poem is true, right?)! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:19:00 PM
You are tickling my funny bone. I love this. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:12:00 PM
How many more verses could you write? I'm guessing two is more than this creep's worth. You make speaking plaining an art form. Peace. :)
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Date: 2/27/2014 2:27:00 PM
Excellent Quatrains Jack! I'm sure it'll do very well in the contest. Hope you had some sunshine today...we did... though it is soooo very cold, : ( xxxAnnalise
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