Jack Horne Poet Quatrain

A Creep

She broke my heart, what can I do?
I can’t believe she fancies you.
You schemed to tear our love apart.
What can I do: she broke my heart?

She’ll see some day you’re such a creep,
And maybe then she’ll sit and weep;
But till that time, you’ll have your way.
You’re such a creep! She’ll see some day… 

For Andrea’s Swap Quatrains contest

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Barbara Gorelick March 9, 2014 at 12:34 PM I knew he was a creep! congrats on your win..Her loss...BG

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2014 at 11:33 AM Heartfelt and I had a feeling this was yours, Jack!! Knowing your situation really made me like this one a lot!! Congrats for your win.

Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2014 at 10:15 AM Love can sometimes be truly blind. Congrats on a fine win.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 9, 2014 at 5:01 AM Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, jack

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2014 at 1:59 AM good one, jack!.. ..sweet 'grads on your award!.. huggs

Kayod5 Kayode March 9, 2014 at 1:30 AM A great work you did here , congrats Jack.

Cecilia Macfarlane March 7, 2014 at 6:51 PM Excellent quatrains Jack! Hugs

Mark Peterson March 3, 2014 at 11:52 PM Nice job, Jack. Been there with this them in real life. Was always better off as I recall, however. Keep up the good work.

Trevor Mcleod March 2, 2014 at 6:32 PM Good poem Jack.

Roy Jerden March 1, 2014 at 12:24 PM Cool form, Jack! Good luck!

Joyce Johnson February 28, 2014 at 9:26 AM So true Jack. Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce

Paul Callus February 28, 2014 at 6:36 AM Very good...but would you have her back!

Russell Sivey February 27, 2014 at 11:25 PM You are a masterful and ingenious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have delighted every humorous part of my me (though I know this poem is true, right?)! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Kathryn Collins February 27, 2014 at 4:19 PM You are tickling my funny bone. I love this. love, Kathy

Robert Johnson February 27, 2014 at 4:12 PM How many more verses could you write? I'm guessing two is more than this creep's worth. You make speaking plaining an art form. Peace. :)

Audrey Haick February 27, 2014 at 2:27 PM Excellent Quatrains Jack! I'm sure it'll do very well in the contest. Hope you had some sunshine today...we did... though it is soooo very cold, : ( xxxAnnalise