A Country Charm

Driving down a dirt road one day
I noticed an old home sitting alone
and laying to waste.

I stopped at the front of the old place
and noticed the old home had a worn
but once loved look, upon its face.

In the corner of the old country farm
stood a crooked, laced gate full of
lovely, early 19th century charm.

It whispers to me of the years gone by.
Standing there alone waiting for some
one to love it again, brought tears to my
eyes.

Upon the gate sweet confederate jasmine
grew and it so fragrantly filled the air.
The wind so gently blew the smell around
the farm with loving care.

Old tattered curtains still covered the windows
lonesome square. My heart could do nothing
but at them with wonder stare.

So many memories this old farm holds, 
It seems to so eagerly be asking for its 
stories to be told.

I gathered a basket from inside of my car
and began to clean up the old gate that
to me, held so much charm.

The smell of sweet jasmine touched my soul
and when it was time to leave, it gave me
the feeling of belonging and home.

What a treat this old place with me shared, 
because for a moment someone cared. 
In those few moments spent, a lifetime of
memories with me it lent.

I think I will come back again someday soon
and from it lift, its lonely gloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 21, 2015 at 1:43 PM
You are truly a poet of global appeal. You write with rare lexical authority and your message is not lost as you grope for the right phrases, for words are at your mercy. This poem is in a class of its own. Giving you a 7 is under-appreciating this heartrending magnum opus. I give a 7+++!
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June 25, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thank you so very much for such a magnificent comment and rating, Hannington. It always does my heart good to read this. Since we last spoke your encouragement has taken me to 7 publications now. 5 #1 international best sellers and 2 best sellers in the US. I have another publication coming out the 26th of June 2017. Thank you for all of your encouragement.
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August 7, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Hannington, Good day to you. Just wanted to let you know that I now have a book on the market, believe it or not. I am so happy about that, it is m first publication ever. The book is called The Butterfly Flutters By and it is on amazon.com and Barnes and Noble website. Maybe I can really be a global poet someday. Sharon
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July 19, 2015 at 5:24 PM
love it
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July 19, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Skat!
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July 19, 2015 at 12:20 AM
Superb tremendous write Sharon! Loved the wonderful imagery!
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July 19, 2015 at 1:03 PM
So nice to hear from you Upma, Thank you for the so very nice comment...God Bless.....Sharon : )
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:29 PM
what a vivid descriptive write Sharon the imagery brought the farm to life before my eyes:-) Hugs Jan xx
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July 19, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Hello Jan, Hope your day is going swell. Thank you for the wonderful comment as always. Always enjoy hearing from you....Sharon : )
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