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A Costly Ring

On a night such as this A besom seated, flighted Witch The Maple near an Oak is blowing; An emboldened Toad on root is croaking. Halfway down the hillside lawn The dusk enlightened flowers sulking As breezes toss the moths about them Close a Ring that slipped to soil. A couple sits within this distance Immune to superstitious nonsense; Without a costly Ring he'd given, He'll work just as hard to earn some other! She sobs unhappy and the day is faded. (Accent on e in second line "flighted".)

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Date: 9/14/2018 5:29:00 PM
Hello Erik Spector, a costly ring, she sobs unhappy because she had gotten the other ring, that did not cost expensive as the other. Have a nice day my friend.
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