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A Cornish Sonnet For the New Year

The past is gone, let’s start again: this year could be the best we’ve seen, so draw a line beneath old pain, just let the love infuse your soul, release your anger - don’t be mean - and make a year of love your goal. Now close your eyes and take my hand: old ghosts will leave if laid to rest. I have to make you understand: to give up now would be a crime; our love can grow and pass the test of time. My heart is in this rhyme. The past is gone, let’s start again: now close your eyes and take my hand… For Craig’s Cornish Sonnet contest

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Date: 10/23/2020 9:54:00 AM
A delightful, hope-filled approach to turning the corner and letting go of old ghosts. I'm enjoying reading your sonnets of many variations, Jack. You handle each with apparent ease.
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:02:00 PM
Nicely structured and composed. Romantic and enticing.
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:13:00 PM
Lovely, flowing lines, imbued with thoughtful passion. A worthwhile creation, Jack.
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:58:00 PM
JACK, CONGRATS ON YOUR HM... LINDA :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:36:00 PM
Jack, nice to see your HM... Hugs ** SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:38:00 PM
Amazing Cornish Sonnets landed upon this list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:13:00 PM
uplifting me with your lilting message, jack.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:59:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet jack.. a deserved win with this write so full of hope... big congrats!!
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:25:00 AM
Nice, hopeful write, Jack- onwards and upwards! Well done. regards, Viv
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Date: 1/4/2016 6:08:00 AM
Oh yes this is brilliant, Happy New Year Jack. love your message in this poem...
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Date: 1/4/2016 6:02:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts for the new year, my friend. May 2016 treat you very well, and thanks for the New Year wishes.
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:42:00 PM
Pleased to see you posting again, Jack. This is an excellent sonnet which flows smoothly thanks to the enviable meter and rhyme. ~ All the best...paul
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Date: 1/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
ahhh, this is sweet and PERFECTLY metered. You are really good at this cornish sonnet, Jack! Best of luck in this contest.
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Date: 1/2/2016 5:14:00 PM
Good to let your heart flow through the rhyme..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:56:00 PM
Delightful sonnet Jack and one I can relate to:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:23:00 PM
Very good Jack. Wouldn't we all like a restart.
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