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A Cool and Misty Autumn Morning

On a cool and misty autumn morning, I heard a gnawing, chomping sound. It came from on the window vine; A hungry critter’s scratching around. It was a bittersweet moment, For I wanted a bit more sleep; I rolled over in my first warm covers; Retrieved from the closet deep. There was a silvery sheen upon the clouds, As the dawn dropped its window dew; I imagined the smell of coffee, then Sighed that the nighttime was through

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:38:00 PM
This is just full of coziness:) Beautiful imagery, truly superb writing sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/19/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/16/2017 6:42:00 PM
Such lovely imagery what a wonderful way to wake up but its tea for me not coffee:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2017 2:50:00 PM
Nice imagery..
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Date: 9/14/2017 3:47:00 PM
cozy, cozy, sun...this poem surely charms my day!..huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/15/2017 9:50:00 AM
Here's having a cyber cup together, Nettie. So glad you liked it.
Date: 9/14/2017 8:44:00 AM
Very reminiscent verse...beautifully done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/15/2017 9:49:00 AM
God bless you, too, WW, and thank you.
Date: 9/14/2017 7:31:00 AM
Lovely! I enjoy my morning coffee.
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:48:00 AM
Oh yes, Kim. Nothing happens before that first cup! Thank you for dropping by.
Date: 9/13/2017 9:49:00 PM
Sometimes we write with the heart and sometimes with the mind. This feels as if written with the eyes. Thanks for sharing.........peace!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/15/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thanks for your astute comment, Richard.
Date: 9/13/2017 8:37:00 PM
That bed felt so good, I so know that feeling. Good write Sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/15/2017 9:46:00 AM
Oh, yes, Charlie, it's delicious!
Date: 9/13/2017 7:10:00 PM
A lovely poem depicting a lovely autumn morning--well written, WW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/15/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.

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