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Cinderella | film by Geronimi, Jackson, and Luske [1950] | Britannica

( Based on the animated musical produced by Walt Disney based on the fairytale written by Charles Perrault.) "Hello Cinderella, how are you ? I am very happy and still in love, the Prince is kind and handsome; and from the first kiss it was truelove !" "What became of your animal friends ? I brought all the birds, and the mice, and other animals to live in the palace; now, they are safe and think it is quite nice !" "What became of your stepsisters ? I allowed them and their mother to stay in my manor, because they had nowhere to go; I am sure they will grow old there and decay !" "What was it like after your father died ? I was a girl when father remarried, Lady Tremaine who had two daughters; then father died shortly after and was buried. The daughters Anatasia and Drizella were spoiled; and Lady Tremaine was very mean, I had to live in a dusty attic room with the mice ; and everyday had to scrub and clean ! " "It must have been exciting to go to the ball ? Oh yes, I was excited and wanted to go, but it seemed impossible that I could; until my fairy godmother helped me as you know. The stepsisters had ripped apart my mother's dress, but, fairy godmother made me a shimmering gown to wear, made a pumpkin into to a stage coach; four white mice into white horses fair, and a old horse and a dog into a coachman and footman; it was magic but only till the stroke of midnight. At the ball I danced with the prince and walked in the garden, and when we kissed it was delight ! " "So I know the ending, your foot fit the glass slipper ? Yes, of all the maidens in the kingdom it only fit me, and though my stepmother and sisters tried to stop it; the glass slipper was the key, soon after I married the prince !" "Cinderella, my last question is what is your advice for young girls ? I want every young girl to know they are a star, and to never ever give up on their dreams; because if they wish and wish they can go far, as the song goes- A dream is a wish ! " _________________________ February 09, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/A Conversation With Cinderella Copyright Protected, ID 02-1428-994-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Conversation A Fictional Character sponsor, Natasha L. Scragg, Judged 03/02/2022 First Place

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Date: 3/3/2022 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2022 9:42:00 AM
Terry ,thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/2/2022 11:52:00 AM
Hi Constance, I enjoyed reading your conversation with Cinderella and a lovely ending with wise words for all young girls. Congratulations on your win Cheers Anne:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2022 9:42:00 AM
Ann, thanks so much for the comment, compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/2/2022 9:02:00 AM
Hi Constance, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2022 9:43:00 AM
Alexis, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 2/17/2022 2:31:00 AM
Good Morning Constance - Hi. I absolutely love this intake on Cinderella. I can remember waiting for it to come on television each year. You did an amazing job with the conversation with details to the story line and with a poetic fashion also. Contest or no contest this is truly well executed in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 9:33:00 AM
Lisa, thank you so much for the compliment and the wonderful comment ~Constance
Date: 2/13/2022 1:07:00 PM
Wow! Constance, This is such a well-written and charming entry for the contest. You gave our beloved "princess" heartfelt and relatable dialogue. I thought about writing about Prince Charming, but I found it a bit of a challenge. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2022 2:25:00 PM
Alexis, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, it was not easy to do but I really like the result also, yes, this new year is going well, I have made myself some big goals and I am working on them ~ Constance
Date: 2/10/2022 12:48:00 AM
This is a charming poem, full of light and love. Though I am not a girl, your poem brought back all the enchantment of this story for me, and what a message of hope for young girls! You are a very gifted poet, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thomas, thank you for the compliment on my poem and the compliment on my writing, so appreciated ~ Constance

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