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A Conversation To Hear

"Franklin, why do you want such a fat, ugly bird? Are you getting senile, or just being absurd?" "Clearly, Mr. Adams, you are not being a friend. My dove, not the turkey, will win in the end. Though Franklin's turkey may be our most native bird, your eagle, as well, will not be the final word. A sign of Peace is what we need, to show other nations of what we heed." "Are you nuts, Thomas, for saying such? Only my turkey can represent what we need so much!" "Have both of you gone so daft in the head, not to see that my eagle should be the one instead? It has power and majesty that our nation new, can be ascribed to the birds advocated by you. We want Peace, but must remember this war, so how can we petition a dove to complete this chore? As for the turkey, I know the pride it shows, but I just can't get over that thing on its nose. So my Eagle is the one without a ruse, and the best bird for the Congress to choose. It can show our intent for Peace with an olive branch, is native as the turkey, with a prideful stance. Freedom will come and be represented by my Eagle's unlimited flight in the sky. Ever watchful for both Peace and War, and without the turkey's nasal sore." "We both know, Thomas, that Adams is correct. His bird is beyond the circumspect." "Yes, Franklin, I have always known that my dove and your turkey would not have flown." "Then are we agreed, gentlemen, that we three as one, my Eagle is the bird that has hatched and won?" Just thinking about this conversation made me weak, especially when I had to give it a tweak. But the Eagle has represented us well, both in Peace and War, as history will tell. I have obviously voted with Adams on his choice, It has given our country a singular voice. It is strong, majestic, and watchful to be sure, and stood the test of time with great enure. One more thing I'll say about the symbol we branded, What would we have thought if Armstrong had said, " The Turkey has landed"?

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Date: 12/22/2015 9:19:00 PM
The Turkey Has Landed!
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J. Amorose
Date: 12/27/2015 9:57:00 AM
@Dan Cwiak No, just the last line of the poem...
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/23/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thanks, J. But I'm not sure how to take that...did you think this one was a turkey? lol I do appreciate the read and comment very much.
Date: 11/17/2015 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations one your win!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/23/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I appreciate your comment and stopping to read my work.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations one your win and your thought provoking poem
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:55:00 PM
Thanks, Jerry. I appreciate your read and comments on this work.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:15:00 PM
I can finally exhale! I've been hoping for this win and I'm darn excited about it! YES, YES and YES ... or, as they calmly say: Congratulations! CayCay YES YES YES
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. I wrote this with the play in mind, and it has given me some ideas for future writes. I'm glad you were in my corner!
Date: 11/11/2015 9:25:00 AM
The last line seals the deal....well done. who said they had no foresight???
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:46:00 PM
Thanks, John. At least they didn't have the gobbler's beak.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:21:00 AM
Dan, a big congratulations to you on this wonderful write placing in the contest ~
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, B W. I tried to think of what they would be saying to each other, knowing Adams was a bit pushy, Jefferson a bit too much of a dove (no pun intended), and Franklin always the oddball. Yet they were compatriots and I believed had to be friends to do what they did in founding our country;
Date: 11/11/2015 7:48:00 AM
Nice arguments presented for the choice, Dan, through your well written couplets. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. I do appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:35:00 AM
Nicely written, Dan. Congratulations.
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Lin. I would have loved to hear that conversation and could only imagine that this is something of what they said.
Date: 11/11/2015 2:43:00 AM
Very good mate you nailed it. cheers Kev
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thanks, Kevin. I appreciate your read and comments.
Date: 11/10/2015 11:01:00 PM
Ha, love the ending, you are a Master when it comes to couplets. Love SKAT
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 11/11/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT. I must admit that I like that form more than any other.
Date: 10/22/2015 8:54:00 AM
GREAT POEM MY FRIEND, CLOSING LINE SEALS IT. A7
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/22/2015 5:41:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. It never occurred to me until I got into writing the poem, but fit the thought and theme better than anything else.
Date: 10/20/2015 2:49:00 AM
G'day Dan... an interesting debate and you've explained it so well - Lindsay
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/20/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thanks, Lindsay. I couldn't help eavesdropping a little.
Date: 10/19/2015 11:12:00 PM
Great write and great ending, Dan
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/20/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Michael. I appreciate the read and I didn't think anyone would like it Armstrong had to use that bird as a reference.
Date: 10/19/2015 8:44:00 PM
Dan - this is outstanding. You obviously saw the movie because your speech sounds EXACTLY like their clever repertoire. You blew me away with this one, took me to where they are standing on the street and debating. I did trip a bit about who is speaking in the last 5 couplets, but after thought, it must be you, the writer. A 10 for you ... CayCay
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/26/2015 9:46:00 PM
CayCay, I still don't know enough about the site to reply in the comments area, but if you get this note, I am very appreciative of the ones you sent. I did the line at the end as a world's perspective, not just the USA. I really like your version, but I think that the extra space taken by the syllables gets the message across. Sometimes less is more...but here I wanted more to be more. I once tried out for a part in this play...Lee of Virginia, so yes, I do know it. My favorite, though, is Man of La Mancha, and I did get to do that one on stage. Hugs to you and your moma...
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/19/2015 9:31:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. Yes, it was me...after all, we were supposed to let our choice be known. I just wanted to think of what the conversation would have sounded like from the perspective of the proverbial "fly on the wall". lol As always, I appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/19/2015 8:05:00 PM
I like your poem and your pick...awesome last line! Good luck in the contest.
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/19/2015 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, David. I appreciate the read and your comments.

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