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Written 2 June 2026 for Domestic Bliss Poetry Contest of  Margarita Lillico

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A Computer Desk


On a desk, heaps of books and papers lie,
A bundle of wires, a puzzling surprise,
An honest handmaid, a modest laptop,
That lights bright and clinches words at a prop.

With touch of the keys, it moves to and fro,
Though not a grand device, it seems to know,
With trace of the fingers, the links to chase,
Across the extensive digital space.

A tangled spread of cables of black hue,
Stretch on the desk, like a sleeping snake true, 
A forgotten pen, a treasured note book,
On which some brilliant quotes and thoughts are hooked.

A wilful webcam watches, ever keen,
To capture lovely  moments, raw and seen.
It eyes the thoughtless yawns, the pensive frowns
And nose, as oft user dozes around.

A printer sits nearby in dull silence
Until it`s asked to come in prominence
With woeful whirs and creaking printing sighs,
Beneath its multiple observant eyes.

At the desk, a fluorescent lamp one wields,
Illuminating this packed working field,
Holding in its sway in the creative life,
A spring of joy, a sober source of strife.

Though the computer desk is worn and old,
It holds unending stories to be told,
A hearty humble haven, strong and free,
The centre of the world for folks like me.

It is where one triumphs, where one  may fail,
Where sublime stories start and journeys trail,
 A loving laptop desk, set as per wish,
Is the seat and  the source of endless bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Now life becomes still without a computer. All our imagination and creativity take wings through our computer. When it goes on strike, it is hard to say how much we miss. This poem is interesting with description of cables like sleeping snakes and a printer with woeful whirs and creaking sighs. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Canerdy Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Krish, CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win. GREAT use of personification. Janice
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations, dear poet, for sharing the first prize in the contest with a beautiful and skillfully written poem that authentically paints too many layers of metaphor.
Jones Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 11:29 AM
The rhymes are flawless! Enjoyed reading and congratulations on your top win!
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