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A Collom Lune Poem - Extinction

EXTINCTION A Collom Lune ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mother natures laws don’t break them… or pay no fines… extinction ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ EXTINCTION A Kelly Lune natures laws... don’t break them… no fines extinction ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kelly lune uses syllables 3, 5, 3, a Collom lune words using the syllabic count. With respect to Eve Roper, and much thanks for her inadvertently pointing out how remiss I was for not putting up this clarification. A pdf link to more information, A well worth read: https://prairiehills.asd20.org/Teachers/emily_heinrich/SiteAssets/Pages/Daily-5/Lune%20Poetry.pdf

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2018 1:05:00 AM

Powerful words, real food for thought. Regards Tom

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/14/2018 4:44:00 AM

Tom, Thank you! My hope is that it is not too late for thinking! Best regards... Miicl

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2018 10:31:00 PM

Powerful message in the great Haiku actually 5 5 5 verse or free verse great write. . Hugs Eve ~`*

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/14/2018 4:15:00 AM

Eve, Nope, it is a Collom lune, goes by word count 3,5,3 the Kelly lune uses syllables 3, 5, 3, as in: natures laws... don’t break them… no fines extinction. I'll put the latter up with the Collom. Check the link out, you'll see where I'm coming from. With great respect... Mick........ https://prairiehills.asd20.org/Teachers/emily_heinrich/SiteAssets/Pages/Daily-5/Lune%20Poetry.pdf