A Collaborated Love

crimson quill, eventide still;
soft words written-
a chance we come together
and dance with ease forever;
love committed grace,
as your outline I trace-
quietude of silent stars ignite by sight,
custom stares,
as we stroll beneath willows to reminisce
on autumn vows we shall not dismiss

I hear echoes of brilliant blue whispers,
voices seeking what needs to be found-
(sound does astound)
when solitude turns into bliss
we sow seeds of kindness abound

amber silents, daylight violets;
vignettes with kismet's silhouettes-
o love of love let's us write nigh,
stardust above does sigh…
a midnight lullaby

writing this love letter, rhymes caressing;
feeling better than ever; a blessing-
here comes love,
dressing journals with silence heard-
we shall write together letters and words

a mount we climbed devoid hope;
rivers flowed without enthusiasm,
and after the storm
I realized…
“love is where there is caring faith”
so now syllables speak volumes,
metaphors are much to celebrate-
come write with me, calvary so let’s elaborate

intuitive depth gave freedom,
time has given moments to concentrate-
shall we, yes, we will collaborate…

medallion sunshine chimes-
for all times

saturated in lonely journals,
you came and rescued me;
a love of sensation we can be-
crimson quill, eventide still,
you laughed with me until
the morn light shined with glee-
along shores of moonshine smitten;
(pressed lips)
with a muse of love, and…
soft words written


*I used all the verses from the poem
written by James Edward Lee Sr. Sample 
co-write for "Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse"*


Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse Poetry Contest
August 18, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Awesome job weaving James words with yours, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 10/30/2019 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations. Great job. It is beautiful.......
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM
many thanks lovely Paula :)-luloo
Date: 10/29/2019 12:42:00 PM
My favorite! Congratulations, Luloo!
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:03:00 AM
thank you so much lovely lady! :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2019 7:35:00 PM
you did a wonderful job with the collaboration... this is gorgeous! love this, it blends beautifully :) hugs
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:03:00 AM
thank you, sweet Sandy, sorry for late response :)-luloo
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