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A Collaborated Love

crimson quill, eventide still; soft words written- a chance we come together and dance with ease forever; love committed grace, as your outline I trace- quietude of silent stars ignite by sight, custom stares, as we stroll beneath willows to reminisce on autumn vows we shall not dismiss I hear echoes of brilliant blue whispers, voices seeking what needs to be found- (sound does astound) when solitude turns into bliss we sow seeds of kindness abound amber silents, daylight violets; vignettes with kismet's silhouettes- o love of love let's us write nigh, stardust above does sigh… a midnight lullaby writing this love letter, rhymes caressing; feeling better than ever; a blessing- here comes love, dressing journals with silence heard- we shall write together letters and words a mount we climbed devoid hope; rivers flowed without enthusiasm, and after the storm I realized… “love is where there is caring faith” so now syllables speak volumes, metaphors are much to celebrate- come write with me, calvary so let’s elaborate intuitive depth gave freedom, time has given moments to concentrate- shall we, yes, we will collaborate… medallion sunshine chimes- for all times saturated in lonely journals, you came and rescued me; a love of sensation we can be- crimson quill, eventide still, you laughed with me until the morn light shined with glee- along shores of moonshine smitten; (pressed lips) with a muse of love, and… soft words written *I used all the verses from the poem written by James Edward Lee Sr. Sample co-write for "Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse"* Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse Poetry Contest August 18, 2019

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Date: 10/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Awesome job weaving James words with yours, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 10/30/2019 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations. Great job. It is beautiful.......
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM
many thanks lovely Paula :)-luloo
Date: 10/29/2019 12:42:00 PM
My favorite! Congratulations, Luloo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 11:03:00 AM
thank you so much lovely lady! :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2019 7:35:00 PM
you did a wonderful job with the collaboration... this is gorgeous! love this, it blends beautifully :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 11:03:00 AM
thank you, sweet Sandy, sorry for late response :)-luloo

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