A Cold Frigate Day

A frosty day the air is cold,The chimney smoke dances in the sky.

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John Fleming

Date: 1/23/2018 5:14:00 AM

This is a very lovely little Monoku, Darlene...a thoughtful observation brilliantly encapsulated. Very well done! My very warmest regards. :) john

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2018 2:45:00 PM

Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/23/2018 7:44:00 AM

Hello John, for your lovely comment. Have anice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2018 7:37:00 AM

Lovely!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2018 12:29:00 PM

Hello Kim, thank you for yur lovely comment. Have a nice day.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/12/2018 9:22:00 AM

This is a beautiful monoku Darlene! Your words set the stage for a serene scene. Wish I was inside by the warm fire. : )

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2018 12:48:00 PM

Hello Connie,Thank you Connie,I hope you near a warm fire now. Have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/11/2018 5:32:00 PM

I can see it clearly...even the smoke is cold... Lovely imagery...All the best Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2018 8:16:00 AM

Hello Micheal, yes the air was cold and the smoke was dancing in the sky. Have a nice day my friend.