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Author's Notes:  This free verse poem is a collaborated effort and write between my fellow poet and colleague, Liam McDaid, and me.  This particular work is the result of at least eight different drafts that we went through over this week (and part of last week) until we captured the meaning and essence that we wished to portray with this "Dark Write."  We both hope that you, the reader, will find this poem and its message to be of interest.  (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid - November 6, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format)

Categories:  allegory, dark, death, evil, fantasy, horror, and magic.

A cold dark yellow unhallowed moon smiles beguilingly In the pitch-black starless and cold empty night sky Suckling upon the blood and the very life force of Pure innocence, light, and goodness . . . . Fear stirs eerily in the forlorn sound of a fog horn that’s Blowing and crying a sad echo haunting far in the distance It warns of the imminent arrival of a malevolent Hellspawn Force of absolute unmitigated evil . . . The Phantom Vampire. As the Phantom Vampire materializes from nowhere in the Darkest shade of night blanketed in the thickest of fog and The coldest of night air . . . One can sense with utter fear And foreboding shivering sounds touching from the shadows Creeping softly cold fingers down the spine with walking Fingers crawling inside a prism of frozen ice and in a mist Of souls crying in the presence of demons while yearning lust Of one blanket covering the sky’s face painted showing Hell’s own hideous face—an exquisite evil and a spirit Drunken and moaning in an eternal fiery abyss of Suffering and howling sounding their own lust for pain Great darkness grips them who walk this troubled Earth Without joy casting happiness to the lepers always and Forever chained to the darkness and eating out hope In the very end . . . . From this spider’s web and nest of dark perpetual evil The Phantom Vampire transforms himself from ethereal Form to his human form quite frightening indeed for Any human being gazing at his grim countenance and His most fiery red eyes glaring intently whenever he Encounters an unsuspecting soul . . . and the sight of His razor-sharp canine teeth bring on convulsive fear In the hearts and minds of his intended victims . . . . The Phantom Vampire’s ritual on the foggy nights of the “Cold Dark Yellow Unhallowed Moon” is to drink the blood Of as many young innocent people as he can all the while Destroying their lives and tormenting their souls in an Unending Existence of evil and debauchery as minions of The Undead . . . . As a servant of Lucifer himself, the Phantom Vampire’s Principal charge is that of a “Soul Seeker”— and seeking Them he does quite successfully while destroying lives This unending process is interrupted only by the dawn of The next day’s morning as the bright rays of sunlight warm The Earth and purify and sanctify the power and purpose of The Almighty Lord God . . . . As a priest . . . a man of the cloth in this bucolic Irish village Along the sea coast, I hold my head in shame and revulsion At the evil escapades rendered by the Phantom Vampire During his nocturnal visits to feed on the blood and souls Of our innocent people . . . . I always turn and talk to God while earnestly praying for their Blind souls through their gossamer eyelids and seeking the Lord’s divine protection and delivery from this most dark and Wretched evil . . . May the bright sunlight show them the Road to true happiness during the Feast of All Souls and to the Gates of Salvation . . . . With no fear and with most clear purpose in mind and the divine Support of our Almighty Lord God in Heaven . . . I shall be the One fulfilling God’s charge in driving that long wooden stake— Blessed with Holy Water and Angel’s Dust—through that Evil dead putrid heart of the Phantom Vampire! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 6, 2014) (Free Verse poetic form)

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Date: 11/7/2014 7:49:00 AM
After scaring me to death with the content of this magnificent writing the salvation comes in the end so I can sleep tonight! Exceptional writing dear, Gary! A seven for scaring me and another one for saving me!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/7/2014 7:59:00 AM
Demetrios!! Mein Guter Freund!! Liam and I are so sorry for scaring you here with this poem, but, as you noted, we did "save you" in the end. Thanks much as always for your wonderful comments and insights. I will get over your way to look at some more of your poems. Ich wuensche Ihnen ein Schoenes Wochenende!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 11/6/2014 5:26:00 PM
Mighty are God's warriors -- great poem guys! This is an epic worth another read at midnight! All the best.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/7/2014 6:51:00 AM
David, Thanks so much my friend!! These are fun to write. Liam and I share at least a couple of themes per week. I believe that "Dr. van Helsing" would approve of this poem as well. HAHA. Have a great weekend!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 11/6/2014 3:06:00 PM
now gary truly you drew excellent on this really blew this piece golden pal now this was fun write i raise an auld glass of the firey leprechaun dew
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/7/2014 6:53:00 AM
Liam Mate . . . May the Irish Gods and Our Merry Band of Leprechauns wash it down with some "Irish" this weekend. (My preference -- as always -- is Irish Whiskey. Have a great weekend!! Cheers, Gary

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