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Pick-A-Title, Vol 45 Contest - Edward Ibeh - August 11, 2024

A Coin in the Fountain

There've been moments when 'twas courage I needed 
like the time I climbed to the crest of a mountain
to overcome my fear of heights. It was superseded
with bravery I found in myself to give me credibility
instead of wishing by throwing a coin in the fountain.
Quarters, nickels, pennies wasted, tossed in futility.

To Rome's Trevi they flock as if that fountain was magic.
Closing their eyes in hopes that wishes will come true,
but crushed when their dreams were lost... how tragic.
Coins beneath the water's surface, glinting in the sun...
Coinage collected for the poor that fountains accrue.
It's tradition to share the moment with a loved one.

Over my shoulder, I've thrown coins into waters of a fount,
but not naive enough to think my wishes would find fruition.
Perhaps we've all lost more coins than any of us can count,
but serves as the perfect whimsical setting for picture taking.
Not a means for making dreams come true, nor an ambition,
but tossing a coin in a fountain is a fantastical undertaking.
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. I feel it is Not about the fountain or the coin. It is about the magic in our heart about the wish or dream. Hope all of yours come true... Have a blessed day writing away...........
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Thank you so very much for such kind words, Paula.
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win with this fantastic piece, Lin:-) I'm so glad you're entering contests again! I can't wait for your next one, my friend.
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Thank you for the placement, Edward as well as for wanting my entries again.
Woods Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Yess how true... it's more about the experience. Beautiful!Congratulations! Xo
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Tis true, Crystol and thanks so much.
Narain Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 11:21 AM
A true prespective of coins in the fountain. Once a while, it is fun to get out of box and enjoy.
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:33 PM
Thanks a bunch, Jay.
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 10:09 AM
For a short time it gives you a bit of hope but soon those hopes are fade away to nothing. Life can present many challenges and we sometimes resort to desperate measures. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 2:45 PM
I'd like to visit the Trevi one day. Would I throw in a coin? Probably, but not to do that would be a missed photo op. Right? lol
One Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Nice to see you entering a contest.. WE all try different things, but in reality we know such things do not work... I like your take on this contest.
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Thanks for reading me and leaving your thoughts. They're appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 5:41 AM
I love this one, Lin! Beautiful and a fave! I have found courage sometimes, for heights, but alongside tears.
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Kim. Tears are an escape route for some of our fears... let them flow.
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