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my Shoes- linger at the bottom of my closet oh sexy heels in a rainbow of colors oooh la la . . . high and lower flat as can be and when I need to find just one pair to wear it is a puzzle a labyrinth to solve my world is shoe-wonderful my Shoes- the flat as can be high and lower all in a tangled mess at the bottom on my closet so on my knees I search the abyss for that pair that are perfect and amazing there are a few that are the best can I be honest they are- my running Shoes ________________________ August 26, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/16-823-513-0 Copyright Protected, ID 16-823-513-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 8/28/2016 8:46:00 AM
Very funny one, Constance:) Loved the pic too:)
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:10:00 PM
- A difficult choice, B.W. ............. I have emptied my closet many years ago :) - No more high heels ... - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:22:00 PM
Perfect expressions! Constance! just got a pair of aqua-colored high-top converse tennies in the mail! gonna wear them casual when I travel to my Daughter's wedding in Napa Valley next spring! love, jimbo
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Date: 8/26/2016 8:50:00 PM
I enjoyed your poetry I don't have that many shoes. Do your shoes match your outfits?Some ladies have more shoes than I do.
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:43:00 PM
You're not alone my dear.... come and see my wife's closet.... very nice...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/29/2016 4:54:00 PM
It's true!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2016 7:53:00 PM
lol
Date: 8/26/2016 7:12:00 PM
Well you can never have enough shoes...I think you need the running shoes to get away from Arthur...lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2016 7:14:00 PM
lol
Date: 8/26/2016 7:07:00 PM
Made me smile! Take away all those shoes in the photo, and voila the perfect woman!! ( kidding ) Loved the poem!
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