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A Clarification

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"Let us shine and not burn," by Elle Casey

A Clarification

Conceived onsets by one's subjective state,
Clueless inceptions nebulously grow,
A mindless blind mute moves, rousing its fate,
Godsend occasion leaves the dark to glow.

Sparks the light of life mimic frames of minds,
Intricacies of distinctions arcane,
Emotions indulge past regret unwinds,
Scattered, detached, night candle burns the stain.

Shatter separateness as divisive,
Conceived borders we being inherits,
Emphases realized as decisive,
Everyone shares their respective merits.

Douse not our embers, but keep strong our flame,
Warm the blaze to a glow from whence we came.

2022 November 21
*5thPlace*
A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE
~~Brian Strand: 2022 November 25

RZ & HMS.

Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2022

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I Am Anaya Date: 11/29/2022 6:28:00 PM Aloha! Congratulations Hilo, on your winning placement for this intriguing poem! Hope your are safe from Mauna loa. It's soon going to be a Mele Kalikimaka, be well! ~Anaya Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 12/1/2022 3:47:00 PM Aloha! William, oh I can just see those tourists running up the hills to get the best selfies. I hear a 2nd volcano has now erupted. Thank you for filling me in. Stay safe, ~Anaya Hilo Poet Date: 11/29/2022 11:45:00 PM 100+ tremors daily since it started off on Sunday, Anaya, with fingering lava flows filling up pocket holes making its descent, slow, nonetheless, an influx of interisland tourists traded their sandy beaches for our glowing mountain. The locals are filling up the emptied added flights flown here, and flying anywhere away from their island home. Anyhow, thanks a bunch my friend, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/26/2022 7:53:00 AM Great rhyming. Congratulations on your win Lasaad! :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/29/2022 11:33:00 PM As it is said at Yale, 'Lux et Veritas" (Light and Truth) ... blessings. Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/29/2022 10:55:00 AM So sorry William. I know the difference - my fingers sometimes do not listen to me. Mea culpa! Hilo Poet Date: 11/26/2022 9:41:00 AM Hi, Linda, William here. Lasaad and I partly share Poet in our names, whereto, I add Hilo which is the name of my hometown, and clueless wherefrom Sotto arises, anyhow, my thanks indeed, Aloha

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/26/2022 3:18:00 AM Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/26/2022 6:07:00 AM Thanks, Sara, truly appreciated my friend, Aloha William

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 11/24/2022 1:10:00 PM A great poem so eloquent and sublime in muse. Loved the accompanying video. Do you pay to post video? Kudos!! ^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/24/2022 1:40:00 PM I thank you for having read my poem and viewed the video, and when time permits, I will also do in-kind my friend, Aloha William

Sotto Poet Date: 11/22/2022 7:15:00 AM Sparks the light of life mimic frames of minds, Intricacies of distinctions arcane. This is really a wonderful sonnet, William. Very well written, and the topic that was picked is also quite fitting. I also watched the accompanying video, and both the music and the subject matter left an impression on me. I am grateful that you have shared this treasure. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/22/2022 8:38:00 AM I am truly grateful, Lasaad, for the tremendous outpouring of kindness, and for your marvelous expression concerning the accompanying video. Have a Hau'oli Ho'omaika'i Day out there in Philadelphia my friend, Aloha William