A Church By the Ocean

The long waves of the ocean beat
Below the minster grey,
Caverns and chapels worn of saintly feet,
And knees of them that pray.


Watch the low green hills of Windsor                            
The low sky silver grey
One ashen light and no other color
On tower and one lonely tree sway.

But there is HE that woke the sleepless love                        
With more than mortal tears
And there is grave that has been wept above 
Sleeping through many years.

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July 13, 2014
Form : Quatrain (ABAB)
Fourth Place Win
Contest: No just that quatrain by Kelly
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Gifford Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Dr. Ram Very inspiring with wonderful imagery. Nature reflects the images of God. And this poem confirms that. Outside, when we still our thoughts, we are open to God all around us. Congrats on you deserving win.
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July 29, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Dr Ram, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:23 PM
A very fine write. Congrats on your win!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Wonderful writing, congratulations Dr. Ram.
Schumacker Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Great write. Great win. Congratulations. Earl
A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Eloquent write Dr Ram ! Congrats on huge win!
Callus Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:04 AM
Excellent quatrain, Dr! Lovely imagery and a great final stanza! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Johnson Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on a great quatrain and win. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:41 PM
A very moving write, Dr. Ram. I loved how you described this lonely, gray place. I felt like I was there, watching all of this unfold. Great work! Congrats on your win!
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Thganks, Kelly, for the appreciation of my poem
Raj Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Namaste Dr. Ramji, A wonderful gothic write. The imagery was so real. Like the old BW movies that flicker. I love the last stanza, it just blew me away. Thanks for sharing Nameste
Chircop Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 10:46 AM
What a beautiful poem about He who woke the sleepless love.
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