A Christmas Memory

I still laugh when I look at the chimney.
It reminds me of a childhood Christmas where
my face was as black as soot,
as I tried to mimic Santa entering a house.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Negron Flores Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much Nayda! *^_^*
Callus Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Very entertaining, Teddy:) Glad that you are able to fall back on such sweet memories:) Congrats on this fine win. // paul
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Greetings Paul! ;-) I'm glad you enjoyed my verse. Thank you for your applause! :-)
Cwiak Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:02 PM
There was a little lamb, whose coat was black as soot. And everywhere the lamby went, his sooty foot he put.* (*I remember this from one of those British comedies...one of the Rons on TV) Your wonderful memory reminded me of it. Congrats on the win.
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Amazing how they are almost alike in plot... I've never watched the comedy show. It sounds really captivating. Thank you for your applause, Dan! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:48 PM
this was a really good entry . Congrats in the contest.
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Hi Andrea. Thank you so much! *^_^*
A  Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^* <3
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:33 PM
A lovely memory Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Thank you so much buddy! *^_^*
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:01 PM
- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Teddy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much for passing by and applauding my work, Anne Lise! ;-) Have a blessed time! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:34 AM
A good sense of humour Teddy! Congrats on your placement!
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Thanks Balveen! ;-) Curiosity sure has its price, lolest!!!!
Wigley Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Terrific memory, Teddy, great fun. Love it. Well done. regards, Viv
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my verse and applauding me, Viv! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Lovely memory so beautifully penned Teddy.. congrats on big win!
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Reads like a winner..I am sure that is a wonderful memory..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:37 AM
Thank you so much Sara! ;-) Sure it is a beautiful memory! *^_^*
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM
very good one to picture this funny memory. Will see you after the holidays! Happy Thanksgiving.
Kimathi Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Thanks for enjoying my piece, Andrea! Happy Thanksgiving!!!! See you soon after the holidays!!! *^_^*
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Teddy cute funny picturr.. ~Olive Eloisa
Kimathi Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Lolest..... *^_^*
Haight Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Nice memory, Teddy, and one not easy to forget! All the best for the contest. Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Lolest... Thanks Sandra! *^_^*
Sietesantos Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:34 AM
This witty piece left me grinning from ear to ear! Love the imagery:-). A-7 and good luck in the contest, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
Kimathi Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Thanks Pandita! *^_^*
Kayode Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 5:45 AM
This is quite amasing Teddy, goodluck in the contest...hugs
Kimathi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Kayode! *^_^*
Nyaga Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Teddy, this is a delightful piece, all the best in the contest
Kimathi Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Thanks again for your morale support bro. Have a great weekend! ;-)
Mwangi Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 7:19 AM
hahaha u should see the image in my mind. loved it
Kimathi Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:28 PM
Lol. Asante sana Marion *^_^* Have a blissful weekend! ;-)
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