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A Child's View of the Moon

My fingertip blots out the moon ~ I can even serve it on a spoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/4/2019 6:13:00 PM
I am running out there tonight to do it with my thumb and a spoon; I will be all-powerful again! Dancing now!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2019 8:20:00 PM
Life is so simple! Joy! ~ gw
Date: 8/3/2019 7:53:00 AM
NICE
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2019 8:19:00 PM
TYSM.
Date: 8/3/2019 7:15:00 AM
A crystal clear moolight play, concise and imaginative. P.S.: I like to howl at it in June)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2019 8:19:00 PM
You've got to wait almost 11 months now. What the H: Howl at it in August. Who will know?! ~ gw
Date: 8/3/2019 5:39:00 AM
Awesome Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2019 10:10:00 PM
Thanks for great feedback, Panagiota! ~ gw
Date: 8/3/2019 2:07:00 AM
This is the perfect image of the innocence of children love this Gershon - a fav. for me. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2019 10:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE, Jennifer. That's always especially meaningful for me. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/2/2019 8:17:00 PM
This is so cute! A well-written Crystalline, Gershon! Love, Kim
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Tried to write it with a child's mind's eye. :) gw
Date: 8/2/2019 5:54:00 PM
Love it, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2019 10:08:00 PM
The Moon and I thank you, Line! :) gw

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