A Child's Concern

A CHILD’S CONCERN

Guess he was ninety years old
Had a cat that died, so we were told
Accordin to dad, his name was Ralph
And old Ralph liked to talk to his self
He sat on the porch every day
Watchin people pass along the way
Old Ralph was so old his wrinkled skin
I would swear was fallin off of him
One day I got close enough to hear
Some gargled talk, “Oh, my Tabby dear.”
My Tabby dear was his old dead cat
I’m smart enough to figer out that
I spose he talked to others too
But no one that my daddy knew
People listened then hurried along
Shakin their head at the old ding dong
Postman told me old Ralph’s day was past
Even dead old Tabby gone at last
No one left for this lonsome old coot
I guess no one really give a hoot
Porch now is empty, sign on the door
Ralph won’t be freakin people no more
Dad says he’s up in heaven somewhere
Hope lonesome old Ralph finds Tabby there

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/11/2014 10:11:00 AM
Howdy Daver, and what a good concern, what is it all about' this (life?) small or big all concerns will come.. Will pass..' all is..'isn't it? great to little ( love a lot ) its all we've got..
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:52:00 PM
Hey, Daver, how is your day going? Just passed by to see if you had a new one up yet. Now finally I will get to work on a very late dinner for when joe gets done trucking at midnight!! Been here catching up ALL night!!!
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Date: 10/31/2014 12:58:00 AM
It is so touching when a young person shows their concern for the elderly. It is up to us to teach them that, because one day, we will become that person who should be treated kindly.... Your words really brought this man to life and made the reader feel a sympathy for him. Great work, Daver!
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Date: 10/25/2014 11:38:00 AM
Hey Daver! Oh, "his wrinkled skin I would swear was fallin off of him", could be annoying for some grown ups who might worry more about aesthetics...but this is more about the ideology of " A CHILD'S CONCERN". A powerful write, Daver. Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 10/17/2014 9:59:00 PM
I really really like this one, Daver. I see Maurice is really digging your stuff too. He is a great poet like you!
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thanks for the plug, dear friend. Wonderful to find Maurice and to know you and your wonderful poetry. Love, daver
Date: 10/17/2014 1:26:00 PM
I like the fact that the sentiment emerges, not because, but in spite of the narrator. In a sense it allows the sentiment to break through more strongly.
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:19:00 AM
Effin Beautiful. Love your poetry Daver. I will fav this. Thank you for having this here for me to read.
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Date: 10/17/2014 9:34:00 AM
Wow, Dave. I loved this poem. It is just so real and touching. I have to give you a 7 it touched me so much.
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