A Chase To the Sea

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Running with the breeze Gray cat and blue butterflies Orange sunset skies Zest meets curiosity just to hear the ocean roar Evening melodies drift far on the floral air as time slips away A cool cat is at the shore thwarted in purple shadows

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/19/2022 5:48:00 PM

Stunning Tanka series, Evelyn. In a few words, you managed to paint a beautiful image of nature and seasons changes. Blessings

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/19/2022 7:49:00 PM

Thank you for the joy of your warm sentiments, my friend. Blessings

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/18/2022 12:47:00 PM

I actually love this poem, I love the butterflies flying freely away, the thwarted hunter, and the ocean........

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/18/2022 3:14:00 PM

Your inspiring remarks are so much appreciated, BJ. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/18/2022 11:49:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, this sounds spooky. Perfect for Halloween. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2022 4:48:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, you are welcome. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/18/2022 3:11:00 PM

Thank you very much for your thoughts, Darlene. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/17/2022 10:47:00 PM

Madame hues is at her best.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/18/2022 9:29:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/17/2022 9:57:00 PM

At least curiosity didn't terminate this cool cat. Enjoyed, gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/18/2022 9:31:00 AM

That is a big plus. Thank you for your appreciation. :)