A Charade of Innocence

When light fades into night, one becomes the night, 
conversing in silent language, one feigns no fright, 
one hums gentle hymns to bring the dark to heaven, 
assumes a child’s innocence like bread with leaven.

How alive illusions are when one feels no pain, 
leaves rustling in the wind let dreams go down the drain.
But reality pierces memory, forgets 
not the face loved in innocence without regrets.

To close one’s eyes from viewing sunsets, reduces 
innocence and wonder that nature seduces - 
landscapes meshing green on gold when sunlight sparkles- 
beauty strengthens the heart to bear hurts it hurdles.

One asks of fate if all these were just mere charade 
like crescent puffs of dust blown off in life’s parade - 
dancing to the flow of waters in gurgling streams, 
mocking facade of innocence, betrayed it seems.

@jjote 011021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/11/2021 3:44:00 AM
Your poetic thoughts are beautifully written, Josefina. I read it several times to enjoy the depth of your visions.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 1/11/2021 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Jenna. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/10/2021 7:17:00 PM
Beautiful Poem and I love it.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 1/11/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Reza. It feels good to be back among appreciative poets after being absent for a while
Date: 1/10/2021 12:30:00 PM
You write such beautiful poetry. Enjoyed the images and emotions you portray. A lovely write, Josefina. Welcome back.
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Date: 1/10/2021 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and encouraging words. Hope to read also more of yours. I am inspired to take up again writing in this forum.
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