A Changed Heart

There was a man named Carlton, who came 
from a rural town.
He was well-liked by all within his community, 
he was the town judge.
Everyone gave him much respect. However, 
he had another group that he was the founder
and head chair of.
This group was a close group that didn't allow 
outsiders.
They didn't accept anyone that didn't look and
act like them.
On a dark and stormy night, Carlton had a bad
car accident.
He was banged up real bad; he lost a lot of blood.
And he needed a blood transfusion STAT.
He also had a heart condition, so he was on the 
top of the heart transplant waiting list.
It was touch and go for Carlton; they didn't know
if he would live long enough to receive a new 
heart.
But in the nick of time, they found him a heart.
A month later, he was released from the hospital.
As time went by, his family and friends started 
to notice significant changes.
From the food he ate, the music he listened to. 
But the most significant change was his new 
friends.
He started hanging around with “ Them.” 
Carlton resigned as founder and the head chair 
of the group he was apart of immediately.
Carlton had a change of heart two ways on that 
life-altering day.








Alexis Y.
03/4/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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March 5, 2021 at 2:44 PM
What an exceptional story. Loved it. I've actually heard of this happening when someone receives a donar organ from someone else. Great job. God Bless, JB
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March 5, 2021 at 11:00 AM
A story that held my attention from start to finish and a lovely ending - he had two changes of heart, very clever dear Alexis. Hope you enjoy the weekend coming, Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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March 5, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Wonderful writing and story. God bless you with many many more. Love you, Gina
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March 5, 2021 at 2:38 AM
- A great story, Alexis - In the future the pig can give us his heart ... I wonder what can happen ... omg. :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 4, 2021 at 6:12 PM
A life threatening event can easily change the attitudes of some people. I have seen it happen before. This was an impressive write.
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March 4, 2021 at 6:03 PM
THIS HAPPENS ALOT WITH HEART PATIENTS, VERY WEL DESCSRIBED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING HIS STORY.
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March 4, 2021 at 3:27 PM
You told this story well. I enjoyed the read. Hugs Rick.
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March 4, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Great story based on tradition. A change of a real heart brings new changes.
Michael Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 8:48 AM
It happens like that when you have a change of heart...All the best Alexis.
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March 4, 2021 at 8:34 AM
I'm imagining he received a heart from someone who would not have been part of the group Carlton created. Just look at how it affected him! A wonderful story told in lovely verse. Hugs, Carolyn
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March 4, 2021 at 8:16 AM
I just cherish the moral of this awesome story you wrote, Alexis. Love the way your story turned in the middle. Perhaps the heart came from one who didn't look like him and that made all the difference. Kudos my friend for this write.
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