A Change of Seasons - Haiku 2

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                                          crying a river of tears
                                             for winter is gone

                                                        ~~~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Fine captures of winters end Elaine, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Winter Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Oh my heart. What a beautiful tribute Lainie. Your writing is always above and beyond. Thanks for stopping by and saying hello. Was trying to get back here, but it has changed so much. I will keep my eye open here, but for now, think I will remain an observer, whenever I can. It is so good to read and hear from an old friend. It is friends like you who draw me back here. All the best. Love & hugs, shar xoxo
Harrison Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Beautiful poem, brought tears to my eyes.
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Hey, Lainie, this is so nice. Did you know about etheree before I had that contest at Soup, or is this a new form for you? You do it very well!! Luv,Andrea
Austin Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Lainie. I'm so busy trying to find an agent for my novel I probably forgot about your e-mail. At any rate, I'm so glad you enjoyed the book and thanks a million for reading it. Love, Dave
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June 21, 2010 at 2:49 PM
kinship is the best thing God made. john
Austin Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful. Tender. A great Etheree. I just got a reply for my book, "Sitter." I'll see what develops after the agent reads the first chapter. Did you ever get my book, "Nine From Cremona?" Love, Dave
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June 21, 2010 at 9:14 AM
This is such a precious Etheree poem. It flows so well and has a loving touch of embrace. It reminds me of my dear and sweet grandmother also. Great job! Joseph
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June 20, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Laine I had a very special grandmother and you are so right the power of love lasts a lifetime. Tears still come when I think of this precious, gracious lady, my grandma. Wonderful memories. God Bless Phyl
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June 20, 2010 at 5:30 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Nice dedication to your grandmother. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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June 20, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Nice dedication to a wonderful famiy member..
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:50 AM
A nice tribute paid to grandmother in nice form etheree
Galua Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:23 AM
I'm in awe by your skill....great write...^_^ v
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