Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

A Change of Mood

In scarlet hues, along country lanes

Berries greet the eye.

Hawthorn, rosehip, bramble too

The season passes by.

A change of mood pervades the air,

A subtle slowing down.

Summer soon will take a bow,

As autumn dons her crown.

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2017 at 6:13 PM A beautiful autumn poem,Gary, have a nice day my friend. Gary Smith September 7, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you Darlene :)

Barry Stebbings September 4, 2017 at 4:07 PM Nicely captured the shift from Summer to Autumn, Gary. The leaves are loosing their color now. // Barry Gary Smith September 4, 2017 at 4:35 PM Thank you Barry :)

Jan Allison September 2, 2017 at 6:49 PM I loved the imagery here gary, congrats:-) hugs jan xx Gary Smith September 3, 2017 at 3:01 AM Thank you Jan :)

Heidi Sands September 2, 2017 at 12:38 PM Congratulations Gary :) Gary Smith September 3, 2017 at 3:00 AM Thank you Heidi :)

Heidi Sands September 1, 2017 at 6:01 PM So beautifully written Gary. I love it. Good luck in the contest :) What a nice poem to read tonight. Gary Smith September 1, 2017 at 6:02 PM Thank you Heidi :)