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A Change of Mood

In scarlet hues, along country lanes Berries greet the eye. Hawthorn, rosehip, bramble too The season passes by. A change of mood pervades the air, A subtle slowing down. Summer soon will take a bow, As autumn dons her crown.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/7/2017 6:13:00 PM

A beautiful autumn poem,Gary, have a nice day my friend.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/7/2017 6:31:00 PM

Thank you Darlene :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 9/4/2017 4:07:00 PM

Nicely captured the shift from Summer to Autumn, Gary. The leaves are loosing their color now. // Barry

Gary Smith
Date: 9/4/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Barry :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2017 6:49:00 PM

I loved the imagery here gary, congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Smith
Date: 9/3/2017 3:01:00 AM

Thank you Jan :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/2/2017 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations Gary :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/3/2017 3:00:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2017 6:01:00 PM

So beautifully written Gary. I love it. Good luck in the contest :) What a nice poem to read tonight.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :)