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A Chance of Love Upon Crossing

They crossed path by chance
And a spark was ignited 
She waited a few seconds 
to chance another look
He was staring back 
Her heart went for a full speed pulsing 
His heart went over the speed limit beating 
Not wanting to loose this chance 
He smiled his way into her heart
And by mutual feelings 
they became lovers
Their choices to cross paths together 
is one that changes their lives forever
A chance of love upon crossing...

          Smile

 Akkina R Downing
        5-16-17

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Susan Ashley Date: 2/10/2018 9:27:00 PM Oh my dear lovely friend Kina! Such a wondrous poem of love at first sight! So romantic and captivating. I love your line 'He smiled his way into her heart'.. your poem is so endearing it put a glow in my heart and a smile on my face :)) I miss you friend, I hope all is well. Warmest wishes with lotsa 'helluva good' hugs, dimply smiles and sizzlin love. ~Su Login to Reply

James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 1/31/2018 5:08:00 PM Akkina, just drop by to visit. And WOW this is beautiful, liken a love story. Beautiful,... WRITE ON GREAT James :) Login to Reply

Edward Mccall Date: 6/20/2017 9:10:00 AM That is such a sweet and beautiful love poem kina nicely done. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 6/20/2017 9:58:00 AM Thank you Ed, this was about my brother and his girlfriend. They're lovely couple :)

Robert Pettit Date: 6/7/2017 5:52:00 PM Looks like the start of something big! Good write. Just correct "loose" in your eighth line. What you should have there is "lose". Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 6/7/2017 6:27:00 PM Thanks for the correction new friend, I appreciate it very much... hugs :)

Heidi Sands Date: 5/28/2017 8:22:00 PM This is a sweet one Akkina. I like it :) Login to Reply

Christopher Flaherty Date: 5/19/2017 6:24:00 PM Hi Annika Like this it smacks of eternal hope Sadly I can't seem to get a mirror to even look back anymore or was that before its been that long Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/19/2017 6:41:00 PM awe, don't loose hope, it's what keeps us strong somewhat :) thank you for the visit and comment... hugs

James Horn Date: 5/18/2017 4:47:00 AM Instead of him being a drinking fool, Threw bar stool into swimming pool; No longer here, Or close and near, Did find destroyed in a fighting duel. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/18/2017 6:01:00 AM Lol... you made me smile this early morning Mr. Horn :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 5/17/2017 1:35:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/17/2017 4:32:00 AM Thank you Ravi, it means a lot. I appreciate very much :) hug

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/17/2017 12:33:00 AM well done, akking... this is serendipity !..huggs Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/17/2017 4:31:00 AM Thank you so much nette, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comment :) hugs

Honestly J.T. Date: 5/16/2017 11:55:00 PM good job (7) -JT Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/17/2017 4:30:00 AM Thank you very much JT :)