Akkina Downing Poet Light Verse

A Chance of Love Upon Crossing

They crossed path by chance
And a spark was ignited 
She waited a few seconds 
to chance another look
He was staring back 
Her heart went for a full speed pulsing 
His heart went over the speed limit beating 
Not wanting to loose this chance 
He smiled his way into her heart
And by mutual feelings 
they became lovers
Their choices to cross paths together 
is one that changes their lives forever
A chance of love upon crossing...

          Smile

 Akkina R Downing
        5-16-17

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Susan Ashley February 10, 2018 at 9:27 PM Oh my dear lovely friend Kina! Such a wondrous poem of love at first sight! So romantic and captivating. I love your line 'He smiled his way into her heart'.. your poem is so endearing it put a glow in my heart and a smile on my face :)) I miss you friend, I hope all is well. Warmest wishes with lotsa 'helluva good' hugs, dimply smiles and sizzlin love. ~Su

James Edward Lee Sr. January 31, 2018 at 5:08 PM Akkina, just drop by to visit. And WOW this is beautiful, liken a love story. Beautiful,... WRITE ON GREAT James :)

Edward Mccall June 20, 2017 at 9:10 AM That is such a sweet and beautiful love poem kina nicely done. Akkina Downing June 20, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you Ed, this was about my brother and his girlfriend. They're lovely couple :)

Robert Pettit June 7, 2017 at 5:52 PM Looks like the start of something big! Good write. Just correct "loose" in your eighth line. What you should have there is "lose". Akkina Downing June 7, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thanks for the correction new friend, I appreciate it very much... hugs :)

Heidi Sands May 28, 2017 at 8:22 PM This is a sweet one Akkina. I like it :)

Christopher Flaherty May 19, 2017 at 6:24 PM Hi Annika Like this it smacks of eternal hope Sadly I can't seem to get a mirror to even look back anymore or was that before its been that long Akkina Downing May 19, 2017 at 6:41 PM awe, don't loose hope, it's what keeps us strong somewhat :) thank you for the visit and comment... hugs

James Horn May 18, 2017 at 4:47 AM Instead of him being a drinking fool, Threw bar stool into swimming pool; No longer here, Or close and near, Did find destroyed in a fighting duel. Akkina Downing May 18, 2017 at 6:01 AM Lol... you made me smile this early morning Mr. Horn :)

Ravi Sathasivam May 17, 2017 at 1:35 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Akkina Downing May 17, 2017 at 4:32 AM Thank you Ravi, it means a lot. I appreciate very much :) hug

Nette Onclaud May 17, 2017 at 12:33 AM well done, akking... this is serendipity !..huggs Akkina Downing May 17, 2017 at 4:31 AM Thank you so much nette, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comment :) hugs

Honestly J.T. May 16, 2017 at 11:55 PM good job (7) -JT Akkina Downing May 17, 2017 at 4:30 AM Thank you very much JT :)