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A Chance of Love Upon Crossing

They crossed path by chance And a spark was ignited She waited a few seconds to chance another look He was staring back Her heart went for a full speed pulsing His heart went over the speed limit beating Not wanting to loose this chance He smiled his way into her heart And by mutual feelings they became lovers Their choices to cross paths together is one that changes their lives forever A chance of love upon crossing... Smile Akkina R Downing 5-16-17

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Date: 2/10/2018 9:27:00 PM
Oh my dear lovely friend Kina! Such a wondrous poem of love at first sight! So romantic and captivating. I love your line 'He smiled his way into her heart'.. your poem is so endearing it put a glow in my heart and a smile on my face :)) I miss you friend, I hope all is well. Warmest wishes with lotsa 'helluva good' hugs, dimply smiles and sizzlin love. ~Su
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Date: 1/31/2018 5:08:00 PM
Akkina, just drop by to visit. And WOW this is beautiful, liken a love story. Beautiful,... WRITE ON GREAT James :)
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Date: 6/20/2017 9:10:00 AM
That is such a sweet and beautiful love poem kina nicely done.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 6/20/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Ed, this was about my brother and his girlfriend. They're lovely couple :)
Date: 6/7/2017 5:52:00 PM
Looks like the start of something big! Good write. Just correct "loose" in your eighth line. What you should have there is "lose".
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Akkina Downing
Date: 6/7/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thanks for the correction new friend, I appreciate it very much... hugs :)
Date: 5/28/2017 8:22:00 PM
This is a sweet one Akkina. I like it :)
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Date: 5/19/2017 6:24:00 PM
Hi Annika Like this it smacks of eternal hope Sadly I can't seem to get a mirror to even look back anymore or was that before its been that long
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/19/2017 6:41:00 PM
awe, don't loose hope, it's what keeps us strong somewhat :) thank you for the visit and comment... hugs
Date: 5/18/2017 4:47:00 AM
Instead of him being a drinking fool, Threw bar stool into swimming pool; No longer here, Or close and near, Did find destroyed in a fighting duel.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/18/2017 6:01:00 AM
Lol... you made me smile this early morning Mr. Horn :)
Date: 5/17/2017 1:35:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/17/2017 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Ravi, it means a lot. I appreciate very much :) hug
Date: 5/17/2017 12:33:00 AM
well done, akking... this is serendipity !..huggs
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/17/2017 4:31:00 AM
Thank you so much nette, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comment :) hugs
Date: 5/16/2017 11:55:00 PM
good job (7) -JT
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/17/2017 4:30:00 AM
Thank you very much JT :)

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