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A Chance For a Poet S Song

A Chance For A Poet’s Song How would I have the upper hand as all around in chaos got drowned How would I stick to a single stand when upheavals the soul do confound. My words whiling away an abiding journey digging for the nectar of beauty many a well long striving to my turmoil hide and bury keep chill and in my secluded shell dwell. Shall my ink change shade and scent from dark black to the colour of blood from the aroma of amber to an anger to vent and pour heavy pain out of my chest flood. So hard I tried to forge my very shield preventing the eye to crime scenes roam see so filthy hands evil and power wield wiping from the world face a whole Home. A word against a world going wrong shall I yield to what I truly can’t handle make time, give a chance for a poet’s song step into the light and leave a bleak bubble.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2024 12:01:00 PM

Wishing you a Happy New Year.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2024 1:33:00 AM

Thank you so much, Victor for your great support and genuine wishes. Always an immense honour and delight to see you and read you.. My most sincere salutations and wishes for a Happy New Year. God bless you.

Jasen Ridley

Date: 12/14/2023 7:00:00 AM

I love this!! Thank you for sharing

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2024 1:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your graceful visit and kind appreciative words! My best regards and wishes for a Happy New Year.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2024 1:30:00 AM

I can’t thank you enough dearest Jenny! You are always so kind to me.. your presence and constant support is so precious and highly appreciated. Thank you so much and I wish you the same.. so happy for you and I'm looking forward to reading your wonderful poetry! Love and hugs. My warmest wishes for a Happy New Year. God bless you.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/13/2023 4:33:00 PM

I've been away for a bit but glad I came across this gem. Yes, let's all sing the poets' song, a song against hate, oppression, injustice and for love, compassion, justice. Very nice Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2024 1:27:00 AM

For the same, Tom.. I have been away for quite a time! And I truly miss being here, I feel I belong here.. I owe a lot to PS and to most of my dear friends and fellow poets.. thank you so much for being always here for me with your kind and caring words.. Your poetry is of great worth, depth and beauty! It truly adds a lot to an avid reader whose thirst would be sasiated by a fine true poetry.. God bless you. My best wishes for a Happy New Year.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/28/2023 4:11:00 PM

I feel your pain, dear Besma, your passion flows through your poetry and resonates with my heart. The senselessness of so much that is happening in our world can be overwhelming, my friend. Thank you for allowing your voice to share the thoughts of your soul through your poetry. Bless you and may the peace that passeth understand caress you in peace. Smiles and blessings Hugs, Bill

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2024 1:22:00 AM

My belated most sincere salutations and wishes for a Happy New Year, Bill.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and great support with your so insightful and kind words! Always an immense delight and honour to have you here and read your so amazing poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/21/2023 4:00:00 AM

“So hard i tried to forge my shield” that line itself speaks volumes to my soul dear besma! Your way with weaving thoughts and feelings is so profound and moving and has a captivating flow throughout. I absolutely love your rhymes! So sublime and creative: a word against a world gone wrong sometimes i wonder if its enough to be the symphonic voice to so many that has for long been served wrong. A chance for a poets song, to find light and embrace it all, ive had the privilege through this poem!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 5:23:00 AM

Dear Empress, how beautiful, generous, genuine and soothing are your words! Already your presence and your spirit of beauty that believes in caring, giving and sharing fills the soul of inner peace and contentment.. you bring a lot of vibrancy not only on my page but also to my soul.. I'm deeply grateful to you and humbled by your so beautiful and appreciative response to my humble poetry.. God bless your amazing soul! Best regards.

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 3:08:00 AM

I see a lot of angst and emotions in your poem.. One that seems to portray an injustice or unfair actions against you.. a poet's song should always be peaceful and spread poetic love, but I guess some do not see it that way... An excellent poem.

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2023 12:49:00 PM

My dear sister...I think the world has always been like that

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 5:15:00 AM

It is more about the world that is getting insane than me, Silent One.. The world is heading from dehumanisation to total destruction! Helpless but not hopeless I feel right now in front of the chaos and killing in the world that go beyond the limits of whys.. Absolutely unable to develop another glossary apart from the one of peace and Love.. thank you so much! Stay always blessed.. Best regards.

Paul Bell

Date: 10/21/2023 2:58:00 AM

The world sure is chaotic at the moment. If mother nature doesn't kill us, we'll do it ourselves.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 5:08:00 AM

I'm afraid so! Let's hope Humanity wakes up and better the world.. thank you so much for your kind visit and rewarding feedback.. God bless you. Best regards.

Aurore Severo

Date: 10/21/2023 1:12:00 AM

I found this to be so touching and heartwarning, xoxoxo

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 2:00:00 AM

That's my immense pleasure to have you visit and comment beautifully on my humble words.. thank you so much! God bless you. Best regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/20/2023 1:10:00 PM

How would I have the upper hand as all around in chaos got drowned ---your opening lines set the stage for your highly emotive poem, my friend. Symphony of emotions resonate throughout to echo your theme, Besma. Splendidly done!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 1:57:00 AM

I'm so much glad you liked and enjoyed my humble poetry.. It means a lot to me coming from a great poet, dear Vijay.. I can't thank you enough for always being here to honour my poetry with your ongoing support and appreciative comments.. deeply humbled and grateful to you. Such rewarding presence and feedback I always hold so dear. Thank you so much. God bless you. Best regards.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2023 12:47:00 PM

Dear Besma, your poetry is like a dazzling gem, meticulously crafted from the depths of your imaginative and poetic spirit. Reading your words brings immense delight and profound joy. Your poem is truly remarkable, evoking a multitude of emotions that awaken the soul. The imagery and vibrant colors you employ transport us to various emotional landscapes. You depict how we often conceal our pain behind the facade of aesthetic scenery. This a fave for its beauty.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 1:53:00 AM

So much beauty into your so appreciative comment! I truly can’t find the words to express my deepest gratitude for the immense delight you brought to my soul.. thank you so much, dear Lasaad for your graceful visit and great support. God bless you. Best regards.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/20/2023 9:53:00 AM

Dear poetess, this is a very poignant and heartfelt write with myriad emotions that stir the soul! The feeling of contemplating complex dimensions and drowning in the raging tides, it's quite palpable here..The scents of our quills and inks change, ranging from different feelings and you've so evocatively you've described how we hide behind beautiful sceneries and veil our pain. We also try to forge a protective shield..In many ways! A very introspective and thought-provoking poem this is, a fav

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2023 1:48:00 AM

Your response to my humble words is an awesome poetry to me, dear Hiya! I hold so dear your genuine feelings and precious thoughts.. thank you so much for being here honouring my humble poetry.. My best wishes and regards. God bless you.