A Celestial Dancer

Light, a celestial dancer: pirouettes. Bending and refracting at the crossroads of fantasy and reality. Weaver of constellations: light summons Dawn's blush, heralding the rise of the sun. And darkness departs at its behest: yielding to Sol's will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Miller Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:15 AM
You have found the beauty within the given text and made the words shine, congratulations
Pinet Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Terry; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Fabulous my friend. Flow and meaning eloquently entwined. Perfect - congratulations! :)
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Thanks, Linda; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Woods Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Yess! I love this imagery and motion... sweet! Congrats
Pinet Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Thanks, Crystol; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Swan Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:30 AM
This contest is an editing challenge. You have edited the sweet points, and given them space to shine - so lovely. J :)
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Thanks, Jeanette; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Now this is perfect, Emile, sure to place high:)
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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