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A Cautionary Tale

Once, a little Spanish girl was given a "regalo" - a dainty little potted plant, a purple-petalled mallow. She set it in a sunny spot, beneath a southern window, re-housed it in an iron pot and named it, "Don Galindo". She gave it water every day, and gave its loam a hoeing. She talked to it and petted it, and marvelled at its growing. Her plant rose tall and strong and fine, rewarding all her labors: "¡Te quiero!" sighed the little girl: "¡Que raro!" cried the neighbors. Joy never lasts, grief always comes, said someone (maybe Byron?) Galindo's roaming, ravenous roots were hemmed-in by the iron. The fine plant sickened and declined, all hopes of salvage scuppered: its lower parts, by steel confined, could not sustain the upper. And so, the moral of our tale - resisting is not giving. Do not preclude, prevent, prevail - rigidity's all very well, but soon turns heaven into hell! Give in to me - set us both free - don't cramp or crowd - things disallowed can hardly go on living.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/13/2017 3:41:00 AM
It's terribly frustrating, seeing those views, and no comment whatsoever. I used to have that the first few months, and even now still. Even when your poems aren't that good (and mine aren't) it's incredibly discouraging to have no one say a word about what you write.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/14/2017 4:47:00 PM
Your poems are outstanding. But yes, it seems odd that so many people look, but don't comment.
Date: 3/13/2017 2:01:00 AM
"things disallowed // can hardly go on living." Very true. What a great parable :) In your favourite rhyme scheme.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/13/2017 2:25:00 AM
200 readers, and at last a comment ... and guess who is commenting! Thank you, my friend.

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