A Cat's Domain

dark allure
brash charm
her movements an acrobatic show
                             mannered rhythm 
like her arched back of individualism

my black cat
stealing affection
               or holding me at bay
complicated, contradictory creature
         with hinges of ease

by the window, she stares at crows cawing 
                                               a chatter of secrets
quietly rehearsing a staged assault
              like the release of dreaming
feathered intrusions from an other worldly out of doors
              twitching whiskers to alarm
                                                                         
her presence
       cheekily visible
       fur soft, a sheen that elevates her
       like the gentle soothing scrub of "purrs"
       added to my comfort
       a shared commitment 
                        our glue



Poem written March 31/2022
Revised January 5, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/2/2022 3:09:00 AM
Good Morning Brian. This was a wonderful way to start the day. I adore cats and this did not disappoint. You captured their being and their ways perfectly. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy the morning and day and keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup as well.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/2/2022 5:41:00 AM
Hello Lisa, Most thoughtful of you to visit + leave a supportive comment. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 4/15/2022 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Ahh!! Those purrs are so nice but those digging razor sharp claws don't feel so good. My cat loves to work those claws on me when she gets in my lap which is seldom. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/15/2022 10:22:00 AM
Hello Sara. My appreciation for your affirmative note on my black cat poem about a cat I cared for while friends vacationed. So glad to read that you have cat companionship. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/4/2022 5:16:00 AM
Added comfort - Great experience. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/4/2022 7:38:00 PM
My appreciation Christuraj, for your generous support. You are a fine fellow indeed. Brian
Date: 4/2/2022 8:16:00 PM
Takes me back, does this Brian, i remember as a boy my own cat, The poetry superb, the love and dedication is wonderful. Sure to do well in contest.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/2/2022 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Harry, for your thoughtful support, but you never know with contests. I am plopping poems on another site now. Be well. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/1/2022 7:24:00 PM
Love this! esp that opening stanza :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/1/2022 9:15:00 PM
Thanks very much Susan. I am posting my lighter pieces here but have found another poetry site for edgier writes. With appreciation for your stop + note. Brian
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