A Cat's Domain

dark allure
brash charm
her movements an acrobatic show
                             mannered rhythm 
like her arched back of individualism

my black cat
stealing affection
               or holding me at bay
complicated, contradictory creature
         with hinges of ease

by the window, she stares at crows cawing 
                                               a chatter of secrets
quietly rehearsing a staged assault
              like the release of dreaming
feathered intrusions from an other worldly out of doors
              twitching whiskers to alarm
                                                                         
her presence
       cheekily visible
       fur soft, a sheen that elevates her
       like the gentle soothing scrub of "purrs"
       added to my comfort
       a shared commitment 
                        our glue



Poem written March 31/2022
Revised January 5, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ricci Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 3:09 AM
Good Morning Brian. This was a wonderful way to start the day. I adore cats and this did not disappoint. You captured their being and their ways perfectly. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy the morning and day and keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup as well.
Sambourne Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Hello Lisa, Most thoughtful of you to visit + leave a supportive comment. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Ahh!! Those purrs are so nice but those digging razor sharp claws don't feel so good. My cat loves to work those claws on me when she gets in my lap which is seldom. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Hello Sara. My appreciation for your affirmative note on my black cat poem about a cat I cared for while friends vacationed. So glad to read that you have cat companionship. Cheers, Brian
Alex Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Added comfort - Great experience. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 7:38 PM
My appreciation Christuraj, for your generous support. You are a fine fellow indeed. Brian
Horsman Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 8:16 PM
Takes me back, does this Brian, i remember as a boy my own cat, The poetry superb, the love and dedication is wonderful. Sure to do well in contest.
Sambourne Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Harry, for your thoughtful support, but you never know with contests. I am plopping poems on another site now. Be well. Cheers, Brian
Woodrow Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 7:24 PM
Love this! esp that opening stanza :)
Sambourne Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 9:15 PM
Thanks very much Susan. I am posting my lighter pieces here but have found another poetry site for edgier writes. With appreciation for your stop + note. Brian
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