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A Cat Tale

^ ^^ ^^^ ^^^^ ^^^^^^ Cat stirs ^^^^^^^ Then Purrs ^^^^^^^ Yawns, Sighs ^^^^^^^^ Makes Cries ^^^^^^^^ M e e o w ^^^^^^^^ Wants Chow ^^^^^^^^ Seeks Dish ^^^^^^^^ Zilch Fish!! ^^^^^^^^ Dried Food ^^^^^^^^ Bad Mood ^^^^^^^^ Eyes Stare ^^^^^^^^ With Flare ^^^^^^^^ Stands Still ^^^^^^^^ Must Chill ^^^^^^^^ Can't Win ^^^^^^^^ Caves In ^^^^^^^^ Full Blast ^^^^^^^^ Chows Fast ^^^^^^^^ Next Scene ^^^^^^^^ Dish Clean ^^^^^^^^ August 25, 2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: Shape Up Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 11/29/2020 ~6th Place~ Premiere Contest: Picture It Sponsor: Maureen McGravy Judged: 09/19/2018 Note: Concrete poems may not display well on phones. Due to the small size of the screens, words, and characters may appear disjointed.

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Date: 11/30/2020 1:11:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content as well as the form in your poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 11/29/2020 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it.Creative way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2020 11:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Sandra :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:27:00 AM
cute cat tail and tale... clever, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/21/2018 2:39:00 PM
A beautiful visual, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/22/2018 5:21:00 PM
So pleased you like this, Line! Thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/21/2018 3:34:00 AM
a joy to read Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/22/2018 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! It was fun to work on! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/20/2018 3:35:00 PM
My goodness, Sandra, the is wonderful... congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for the congrats and nice comment. I had a lot of fun creating it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/20/2018 9:53:00 AM
This one is so lively Sandra! You can feel the tail twitch as you read it. Fabulous job! Thank you and congratulations! :) xomo!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:32:00 PM
Thanks again, Maureen, for another fine Concrete contest which I had so much fun with! I am pleased that you enjoyed it and appreciate my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/20/2018 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. Great tale (tail).
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, Subimal, for your congrats and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/19/2018 10:39:00 PM
I loved your unique cat tail (tale) Sandra. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie! I had fun with it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/19/2018 10:25:00 PM
Wonderful shape AND a quite impressive rhyme scheme (monometer?). I am quite impressed with your fitting top finisher.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse, for your very supportive comment! Yes, a rhyming monometer (having one foot). I appreciate your visit and input very much. Sandra
Date: 8/25/2018 11:37:00 AM
Very creative! I like this Sandra :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi! It was fun to work on. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/25/2018 11:04:00 AM
Awesome!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christopher, for your visit and very supportive remark! I appreciate it so much. Sandra

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