A Castle of Temptation - Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

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A CASTLE OF TEMPTATION - collab with JA Fraser A CASTLE OF TEMPTATION Proudly standing amidst three lochs, verdant hills a Castle enciente breathing beauty but sadly chants passed feuds sparking battles having harried their foe and it's demise caused by Frigates cannonball screams. Colonel MacRae-Gilstrap rebuilds now redeemed: stoned arch bridge supersede the sea highway flow, circular stairs and ceilings with coat of arms grants changes made but its history today remains still Tourists not deterred by ghost tales scary extreme But await they exercise for imaginations to show the setting, a romantic reincarnation that enchants attracted lovers to celebrate their matrimonial thrill Eilean Donan Castle in its stunning reachable location pose the Western Highlands of Scotland a temptation. Written by: Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Andrew Fraser 8:46 pm; August 18, 2015

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Date: 9/11/2015 6:10:00 AM
Huge One James, this the first poem we write in person... Im just happy we did.... like i said even before the contesr came up I am already saying to you ky desire to write one about castles... thanks much~~Olive Eloisa hugs!!xxx
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:37:00 PM
A well and a beautiful description. The flow of your excellent write depict imagery that intoxicated the readers....brilliant one......A.M.
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Date: 9/6/2015 9:54:00 AM
Someday I hope to visit Scotland but it will have to be after I visit Ireland first because my paternal bloodline goes there. Great collaboration my friends. A pleasure to read this fine morn. A7
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Date: 9/14/2015 2:55:00 PM
Hiya Robert, you certainly won't be disappointed. Thanks for your always kind words, James :) :)
Date: 9/4/2015 3:28:00 PM
It sounds a wonderful place to visit james - good luck to you both in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/14/2015 2:54:00 PM
Eilean Donan Castle is my favourite of all the Scottish Castles. The setting is absolutely stunning no matter the weather. If your ever in the area, you won't be disappointed, hugs//James xxxx
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