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This is one of my favortite poems I have ever written. Echelons of birds, their V shaped formations are always a beautiful sight. They reminded me of a wishbone at one point and I like to think that once they land at their migration's end, they have achieved their wish and are at peace in their new home. Written in 2021.

A Calling for Comfort

Isolate echelon 
in a temperate sky
God’s migratory wishbone
snaps
when it reaches 
the place called home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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