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A Brown and An Ash Horse

I am both a brown and an ash horse As ash I limp a little and tilt too In the blue field As brown I keep words in your jar Till they are butterfly to disappear In the multicolored air I wanted them for my hair Time did not care I want to put my white rings In your embroidered oval box Awesome nothings that are everything Come out as rhododendrons As we draw the crayons Some of them in the wings of a heron Gold and orange splashing lyrics Linger please A little As the lamplight chats with the keen leaves Of the money plant beside my bed I pant for words of poetry Fireflies laugh with green glee Last night some stars fell there I look for them now near my pillow The ash laughs Red and green up and down In the cardiograph Billows are all gone While putting on the gown Eyes reach at the mirror The brown wears a crown November 21, 2017

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Date: 12/2/2017 4:37:00 AM
Such an elegance of enchanting images this beautiful poem displays, Probir. Your gifted pen is extraordinary. The words flow like the rivers from the Garden in the beginning ... such cool shades of beauty to rest one's thoughts of serenity in. Very beautiful poem. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always, brother.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/4/2017 5:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Freddie ...
Date: 11/21/2017 9:30:00 PM
Probir, this poem to me is intense, intimate, compelling and of course gorgeous in imagery, thoughts and word connections.. your images are whimsical and melancholy.. 'Last night some stars fell there I look for them now near my pillow'..inspired poetry and enjoyed!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/22/2017 7:49:00 AM
Yes, I noticed that the billows were all gone in your cardiograph, the ash laughed and the brown wears a crown - this could be interpreted as sadness/worry replaced with elation/happiness... my simple critique.. or it could be much deeper, metaphorically speaking...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/22/2017 7:12:00 AM
Your analytical remarks are very positive ... I am happy my cardiograph has been read by sharp and sensitive eyes ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/21/2017 12:17:00 PM
love the imagery you've created in your write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/22/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 11/21/2017 6:56:00 AM
Quite an intriguing poem, Probir--well written, as always!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/21/2017 8:26:00 AM
Well ... Then a well written intriguing poem! ... Thank you ....

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